Broken Strings

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Description

 

People were either a dust particle, or a raindrop.

The problem was, you were neither.

 

Foreword

 

 

 

It was almost amusing at how much more disgusting people can get. Since their thoughts only revolve around 3 things: Lust. Desire. And Hatred. In this century, you can never know who's your friend, or enemy.

Infact, you can't see the difference between them anymore.

For them, they had to achieve those top 3 priorities. They were prepared and willing to push their friends aside, their lovers, their family, to have it all. 

It was almost amusing, almost.

Goodbyes

hurt when

the story is not

finished

and the book

has been

closed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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N/A : This one-shot is an entry for De retrouvailles et D'adieux writing competition.

 

 

 

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byunalia #1
Chapter 2: Can we have another chapter??goshh serve u right park chanyeol..hihihiii
rannoosh_96
#2
Chapter 2: Wow! Oh my god my heart is aching! I love this!
And yeol you how could you??????? I hate you!
That was amazing authornim! I loved it!
Lisanna08 #3
This was amazing... So sad ;( Wish I found it earlier though... It really captured the emotions well! I could never write something like this O.o... I usually like stories that are longer, with more chapters... but I absolutely LOVED THIS! I'm also in love with your other stories... PLEASE KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK!
ShineexoWorld #4
Chapter 1: I read your story out loud in my room. gosh, im happy i didnt end crying. I was reading so emotionally as if I was Baekhyun himself. I was feeling what he felt. Awesome story, loved it. ;( (sad face cos im feeling really down now)
junepearl
#5
Chapter 2: i really liked your example of people either being dust or raindrop, & also of baek being the flower and yeol as the bee...T^T the ending was really satisfactory & good too; im glad that baek chose not to drag it on further!
thank you for your hard work & beautiful writing!
sabrinamay
#6
Chapter 2: Hi I need to confirm something with you. Is this one of the prompts you chose?
http://24.media.tumblr.com/e8f8d54c487e3216b3ee4b3c66373bca/tumblr_mw7lxpEmVg1r0e7foo1_500.jpg

You gave me the wrong number if that's the case. I've changed it for you already
dreamyflower
#7
Chapter 2: Finaaaally read it! Gosh, sorry, the day after you sent me the link I was out the whole day. Anyways, despite being awkward with the genre in general (it always takes me a bit to get myself to read something with in it), I liked it.
I like how it doesn't have the typical ending. It's not the kind of happy ending as always, but not a sad happy ending either, but realistic.
I like that Baekhyun found the strength to move on. Btw, what I actually liked the most is his division between people, raindrops and dust; it's nice.
Starry-Valley
#8
Chapter 2: Oh...my...god... PREACH, BAEKHYUNNIE~! *snaps finger in Z formation* Baekhyun went into Preacher man mode for a second there, you go boy!
Starry-Valley
#9
Chapter 1: Now, gull, you know I lost my tear ducts in the war but this was so good and I give you mad propsies, gull.
JEONJUNGK00K #10
Chapter 1: I cried my eyes out so so badly. Its as if I'm the one in Baekhyun's place and this hurts so much ;__; its so sweet of Baekhyun to still love him even when he knew Chanyeol is cheating on him.

I understood Baekhyun. I once got dumped and the only reason is, "the love is just not there anymore,' and I accepted the excuse. Maybe my judgements were wrong. Maybe those 12 months meant nothing.

I'm glad I found your story. Tearing up once in a while makes you feel good, somehow