Title: [17/20]

Cliche, but it fits your story well. Maybe you should try something more eye catching, because in sea of titles, many would skip 'Perfect Fit.'

Foreword/Description: [10/10]

I didn't see anything wrong with it. Plus, I loved your foreword. Good job, you earned full points in this category.

Plot and Originality: [30/30]

Oh my God, you totally surprised me with the plot! I seriously thought Yeeun was going to end up with Chansung instead of Junho. I'm giving you full points because not only is this a plot you don't see often, but the originality was just amazing.

Language: [09/10]

I suggest writing out the word 'bastard' instead of censoring it, but what you're doing is fine. I saw no other mistakes :)

Characterization: [20/20]

I feel like I should just give you full points on everything ;;

I saw nothing wrong with your characterization. 

Flow: [08/10]

I think the flow of the story went a bit too fast for my liking, but maybe it's just me?

Total: [94/100]

I think this was the highest score I'd given so far :) I seriously enjoyed your story and hope to see more of your works in the future!

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