The First Sight

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Description

The story about a girl that fell in love with a boy at first sight, because the boy helped the girl at one raining day

But can the girl tell the boy she loves him even when they don’t go to the same school or know each other?

Does the boy still remember the girl when a miracle pulls them together and make them meet the second time?

And the most important thing, does the girl truly love him or is it just another crush?

The Character

Amber a.k.a Amber Josephine Liu

18 year old

Nickname = Llama

Xiumin a.k.a Kim Minseok

18 year old

Nickname = Hamster

Kris a.k.a Wu Yifan

18 year old

Foreword

AnnyeongHaseyo!!! This is my first fanfic that I make that's will be not be one-shots... But I don't know if I make the right decision to make this story..hahax...Just kidding..

I make this story because I really want to make a story that is not one-shotz..

This fanfic was inspired by comic from the writer of Konna Risa the title is .... ( I don't know how to write in japan language )

But I will change the story line. This story will be different from the original one.I just use my own way..

I hope you guys will enjoy my story..

English is not my first language... Subcribe and leave some comment..Comment can make me more passion to make the story.. I also love(100%) comment ^^!!!

Love ya!!

Credits for the poster and background : XOXO Graphic Shop and SMHY

Credits to ♠ Reviews & Relishes ♠ for reviewed my story!! I really appreciated it!!

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KpopOwl07 #1 May 18, 2014 04:03:06

Chapter 5: love the story, update soon
xiuber ^-^ cute couple

Miss-Mong #2 May 10, 2014 11:15:29

Chapter 5: Finally I read it dear.. Berkurun subscribe tp x bca.. Komik apa ya yg Nabila ambik idea utk tulis cerita ni? mna la tahu kot2 akak pnah bca..

becauseimstupid #3 Jan 2, 2014 06:55:22

Chapter 7: i'll be willing to help you with the story ^-^ i'm not sure if i could help with the plot but i can clean up the grammar mistakes for you since english isn't your first language.

aiyuni #4 Dec 30, 2013 15:41:43

Chapter 6: Kris going to help xiumin realize he has feelings for amber while having feelings for amber? Bad choice for kris he'll just fall for amber more.

krisber_1806 #5 Dec 30, 2013 15:41:42

Chapter 6: Oh so kris will being cupid...

hikka000 #6 Dec 22, 2013 00:14:14

Chapter 5: Nyahhhh, i just hope amber just has a crush on kris, still hoping for xiuber :D

aiyuni #7 Dec 20, 2013 19:27:04

Chapter 5: Amber's starting to feel something toward xiumin? Xiumin's also feeling something toward Amber? Amber has a crush in kris, kris seems interested in amber. This is interesting. So far kris seems like the middle man.