Chapter 1: this is a good story~ despite a little typos, like it should be doesn't but you write it deosnt, it still a good one. :)
kinda sad for Luhan, who has changed because of the cruel world of idol' life. write more~~ ;)
Chapter 1: oh my goodness, this is really wonderful. Aside from a few typos (like saying 'if' when it's supposed to be 'of') or missing a few terms, your story is really, really nice. It stuck my heartstrings when I finished it - short and sweet. It'll be great if there's a sequel or anything :P
Comments