Luhan's Puzzle

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It is a time of darkness for Luhan. Betrayed by his best mate and left to rot in the streets of china, Luhan has to find a way to find all the missing jade pieces and run from his mortal or not-so-mortal enemy, JLAB. 
 
However, he makes a plan and finds hope when he meets Byun Baekhyun and Oh Sehun,  two of the last jade holders in the world. Together with Baekhyun, can Luhan find the other jade pieces and save the world from JLAB's wrath?
 

Foreword

Sky dawns. Luhan looks up, the new house looks like a palace.
 
"Is this really it, ma?"
 
Luhan's mother looked up and stared at the house with more interest than Luhan.
 
"Yes. Our neighbor is your old friend! Yixing! I hear people call him Lay now." 
 
Luhan his head. " Yixing? Yeah, that sounds familiar. He's like us right?"
 
Luhan's mother nods very seriously. "You'll have someone to talk to now." She guides Luhan into the house and Luhan greets Yixing by the name 'Lay'.
 
" You're one of us right? We have a secret! No one else can know. That means we're friends." Lay whispers to Luhan, smiling.
 
"Friends." Luhan agrees, and shakes  Lay's hand.
 
 
 
 
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AsianTroublemaker #1
Chapter 11: Hunhan!!!!!!!!
squishystyle #2
Chapter 10: HUNHANNNN~!!!!! Muhahahaha, they ruined BaekBaek's perfect couch. x) Oh crap, I wonder if, when they go to JLAB, they'll get caught. Or maybe just one of them gets caught and the other tries to save them. @_@
squishystyle #3
Chapter 9: My favorite chapter would have to be a tie between this one(for HunHan reasons), chapter 7 and chapter 6; maybe chapter six because we find out about Lay and how he did allow a distraction for Luhan, which shows that even if he was a jerk, amongst other words, he still does care about Luhan's safety. And favorite character would have to be either Luhan or Sehun; probably Sehun!!:3
squishystyle #4
Chapter 8: I really, really love this plot! It's so unique and I love how the characters are portrayed. Like Lay is the bad guy but he still does care for Luhan, how Baekhyun acts like a jerk but deep down inside he isn't one, how child-like Sehun still is considering his childhood was pretty much taken from him, and how Luhan has this huge load on his back but he still keeps going. Gah, the HunHan!!:3 Looking forward to the next chapter! ^^
-boradori #5
Chapter 5: this is so interesting omg ;;
I'm hooked!
poor luhan cos his lay hyung joined the dark side ;__;
luhan is going to enter JLAB's territory now, i hope he stays safe.
and sehun was captured twice(?) so do he still have the jade or....
what does JLAB mean btw? hehe
b2utyful_angel #6
O U O This looks interesting.
/Subscribes
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