Sugars

Description

 

sugar

/ˈʃʊgə/

verb

- sweeten, sprinkle, or coat with sugar.

- make more agreeable or palatable.

 


 

Shim Eun Young and Kim Jae Joong were the total opposites of each other.

 

Eun Young was a sophomore.

 

Jae Joong was a senior.

 

Eun Young hated everything with sugars. She was a cold and quiet girl - She pushes off everyone who tries to approach her for no reason at all. She always wanted to be alone and have a space for herself. She has good looks, and every guy gets mesmerized with her, but in the end, they were all rejected by Eun Young. All the flowers were thrown like trash... All the chocolates on Valentine's Day would be shared to her best friend. Eun Young didn't like the noise. She didn't care. Nothing around her mattered. For the longest time in her life, she remained that cold and stern girl everyone knew of.

 

While Jae Joong liked sweets - A lot, in fact. He was that social butterfly everyone liked. He was so popular with the girls, especially with his killer-smile that would make girls melt in an instant! He was a senior who would graduate soon. He was a cheerful and hyperactive guy, someone who likes to goof, laugh, and make jokes around every single time. Jae Joong was always surrounded by people, he was never avoided. He would pay attention to everyone, whether you are a nerd or of the worst kind. Everything around him was filled with warmth and joy. He was that cute and happy-go-lucky guy everyone knew of.

 

But what would happen if one day, a miracle happened... And Eun Young then started eating sweets?

 

Would her sweet tooth awaken... Before everything ends?

 

This is her sweet love story. Bittersweet.

 


 

 

Foreword

 

dedicated to RV. i hope you would notice, someday...

(c) eternities. all rights reserved. 2013

do not copy.

 


 

eternities
10/03/14 - Spin-Off Chapter edited! :3 ★彡

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suhashiny
#1
Chapter 5: Aww sweet!!!

But still I would have liked to see JJ become her boyfriend in the original story...
faridpraderago #2
Chapter 5: i really like your story!! Love this one,hope you make another jaejoong's story soon,authornim^^
_chained
#3
wait i just read your story feed just now
whaaat.
omg
i
shall
wait
like
a
laydeh.
/sits patiently and wonders why i am born as a girl
WHUT.

hi eonnie. :D
(this is seriously the weirdest comment i have. like. wtf)
_chained
#4
ermahghad
this story is so
ah
may
zing

it is so freakin cool i can't :'(( IM GOING TO SHARE THIS TO EVERYBODEH!

<3
aptxgirl #5
Chapter 3: This is beautiful.. When I read 'Thump' I my heart beats.. You are so good!! Thanks for writing this story ^^
oatlover #6
Chapter 4: I think most people could relate to your love life (I do :))
since you write from your own experience, I think readers can feel the sincerity in it
so it's a good point there :)
my first love is a friend in junior high school (I met him at this orientation event for new students)
although I never confess my feeling I think he knew somehow
but I'm thankful that even if he knew he didn't avoid me or such
sometimes I wonder if I did differently, maybe if confess things will go differently
I'm a bit dense in this thing called LOVE
oh well, it's life...my life LOL
but wether you choose to confess or not, I wish you the best :)
oatlover #7
Chapter 3: a really really nice-awesome-great story
Author-nim, this is well written. I love your choice of words
how you describe each character
I love your way of telling/writing the story
good job :)
one thing tho, I can't seem to visualize this certain scene at the end : "Eun Young saw a hand in front of her. She raised her head and her nose touched another man's nose. They were so close - So close! Eun Young blinked twice as the guy bended over to take a chocolate, not noticing their lips brushed against each other a bit."
hehehe...this reader of yours (pointing at me) is a bit shallow :(
do mind telling me more about this part?
Author-nim, you're awesome! :)
kkhihi
#8
Chapter 4: OMG!! i LOVE this!! it was so...sweet! lol yes, that is the perfect word to describe this story "sweet"!! i sort of wish it was longer though so i squeal more XD!! but ending it like this was great too :))

And for you and your love life, i wish you the best ^^
hellobabe #9
Cant wait until the update, fighting~ ^^