Progress Makes Perfect

Knocking On the Other Side

“Where are you going?” Baekhyun asked. The bell had just rung, and I was nearly out the door. Baekhyun was still sitting at his desk. A couple of girls were clustered near him, and they looked away, but it was obvious they were listening.

“Outside. Bye.” I wondered if Kai was going to come.

“But it’s raining,” Baekhyun said.

“Yes.” I said patiently. “That’s very obvious.”

“So, are you sure you want to go outside?” The one thing Baekhyun had going for him was his persistence. I ignored him, and turned to go.

“Want to come with me to one of the music rooms instead?” I paused with my hand on the door.

“Sorry,” I said. “But I’d really like to just go outside for a bit. Maybe next time.”

Before he could respond, I stepped out. I could hear a loud sigh of relief and a general stream of girlish chatter start up again.

“Don’t mind her,” someone said. “She just likes being alone. Don’t feel like you need to be her friend or anything.”

I couldn’t hear Baekhyun’s response; it was a muttered phrase. Kai was nowhere to be seen. I wasn’t surprised. Part of me had expected this and so I wasn’t disappointed. People couldn’t be bound to others. I kept my head down as I walked through the crowded halls. The smell of mud was prevalent in the corridors.

It was a relief to be outside, even though the rain was quite heavy.

 


 

I loved the feeling of rain as it drenched my hair, but even I had to put my hood up after a few minutes of the relentless downpour. I stood under the shelter of a few trees, just watching the raindrops puddle on the ground. Breathing in deeply, I closed my eyes and pressed my fingers against them so that I saw flashes of blue, erratic light.

“You’re really wet.” I opened my eyes. Baekhyun was standing in front of me, holding an umbrella.

“It feels nice.” He looked surprised at my genial tone. Perhaps it was the first time he’d heard it.

“You know this conversation sounds wrong in so many ways, right?” He smirked, and I rolled my eyes. He poked at me.

“Here,” he said, offering me the umbrella. It was a ridiculous one, pink with white poodles all over it. He saw the look on my face and laughed. “One of the girls gave it to me. Apparently it’s a name brand.”

“I’d rather not get it wetter then. Might wreck its quality,” I said. “It’s fine. I’ve got a hood I’ll put up when I head in.”

He closed the umbrella, and came to stand beside me.

“What are you doing?” I asked. Little raindrops dripped down from the trees onto his hair.

He put a finger to his lips and closed his eyes. “I want to see how nice it feels too.”

His brow furrowed and he leaned forward. He was so tense and out of place, with his name brand clothing and borrowed pink umbrella in the downpour of hard rain.

“Why didn’t you go to the practice room?” I asked, trying to ease him out of his tension. His brow relaxed, but his eyes were still closed.

“They were going to follow me,” he said. “Those girls. They’re nice and all, but I can’t concentrate when people are around me. On music. Like this.”

“Is this music?”

“Your voice or the rain?” A tease I didn’t expect. He leaned back against the bark of the tree.

“Whichever you think I meant.”

“Your voice is nice and soft, like my teddy bear. Until you start being sarcastic.”

“Be serious.”

“You gave me the freedom of choice.” He paused for a moment, and let his arms hang loose by his sides.

“You know, this is the first time you’ve started a real conversation with me.”

“That’s true.”

“Friends?” His tone was light. I might have been egotistical to think there was hope in his voice, but I seemed to hear it. I thought, focusing on the length of his eyelashes.

“Progress.”

"You know what they say," he said, closing his eyes. He attempted to speak English. "Progress makes perfect."

 

His English was pretty bad.

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ollie_wolly03
#1
Chapter 36: this story has SO MUCH POTENTIAL grrrrr!!! im incredibly sad to see that it never got to finish and that it’s been around 3-4 years already since this story was last updated. i hope one day you get the chance to come back on aff to continue this amazing story cuz ik i’ll be anticipating it for sure ;)
TKeyAlex
#2
Chapter 30: I cried hardly on this chapter. It was ironically beautiful and painful as reality was. Kris made a good decision and the moment I read the word 'strawberry pie', I burst out in tears.
mincupin07 #3
Chapter 36: THIS. IS. BEAUTIFUL.
I'll patiently wait for the next chapter.
MissFrost
#4
I love the flow of this story. It's perfectly paced, and I love the contrasting characters of Kai and Baekhyun. I'm obviously on TeamKai because he's so charming and the part where she falls in love when he danced is SO relatable omg, but also, I kind of see myself in Baekhyun so it's kinda hard to swallow some things about him haha. Oh and I love the OC's past as well. It isn't so dramatically tragic to the point where it's unbelieveable. I can't wait to see how this progresses!
cheesehun00 #5
Chapter 36: Omgg i cant believe i only find amazing story now from amazing writer TT pls continue on the story~
bts_groupie #6
Chapter 35: I read this in a few hours and I admit that I needed a dictionary for like 5 chapters lmfao I really like it though. I love the friendship between her and Kai
milkshakehoney
#7
Chapter 35: Kai dancing = LOVE <3
yeollshin
#8
Chapter 33: Goshhh how could this feel so beautiful and heart-breaking at the same time.... The storyline is interesting and it's working so smoothly. It's not makes me cries but the pain is actually lingering in the air. It's awesome!!! I can't wait for next chapter :)
Whitefall #9
Chapter 31: This is such a cute story! I've also read your other slice of life, and let me tell you -- you have such a talent for writing ㅠㅠ Thank you for writing and I'll stick to this one until the end. Even though the content and plot seems depressing, the little cute twists like at the end of this chapter make me so happy haha. ^___^