Loneliness

Knocking On the Other Side

 

My brother was gone by the time I had returned. A short note on the table explained that he would be gone for a day. Maybe two days. I left it there, as if the thin sheet of yellow paper could make up for his absence. Mechanically, I turned to the mundane aspects of life that he had left behind. On the other side of the kitchen wall, I could hear the banging of pot lids and the whistling of steam vapor escaping kettles. A radio blasted rap, and after a few verses, Kai joined in as well. The hustle and bustle of activity continued well into the night, until the radio stopped playing and there was a sigh of contentment that I could hear from my side of the bedroom wall.

 

Perhaps, on the other side of the wall, loneliness was a shadow that disappeared with the flip of a light switch and an off-key note. 

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ollie_wolly03
#1
Chapter 36: this story has SO MUCH POTENTIAL grrrrr!!! im incredibly sad to see that it never got to finish and that it’s been around 3-4 years already since this story was last updated. i hope one day you get the chance to come back on aff to continue this amazing story cuz ik i’ll be anticipating it for sure ;)
TKeyAlex
#2
Chapter 30: I cried hardly on this chapter. It was ironically beautiful and painful as reality was. Kris made a good decision and the moment I read the word 'strawberry pie', I burst out in tears.
mincupin07 #3
Chapter 36: THIS. IS. BEAUTIFUL.
I'll patiently wait for the next chapter.
MissFrost
#4
I love the flow of this story. It's perfectly paced, and I love the contrasting characters of Kai and Baekhyun. I'm obviously on TeamKai because he's so charming and the part where she falls in love when he danced is SO relatable omg, but also, I kind of see myself in Baekhyun so it's kinda hard to swallow some things about him haha. Oh and I love the OC's past as well. It isn't so dramatically tragic to the point where it's unbelieveable. I can't wait to see how this progresses!
cheesehun00 #5
Chapter 36: Omgg i cant believe i only find amazing story now from amazing writer TT pls continue on the story~
bts_groupie #6
Chapter 35: I read this in a few hours and I admit that I needed a dictionary for like 5 chapters lmfao I really like it though. I love the friendship between her and Kai
milkshakehoney
#7
Chapter 35: Kai dancing = LOVE <3
yeollshin
#8
Chapter 33: Goshhh how could this feel so beautiful and heart-breaking at the same time.... The storyline is interesting and it's working so smoothly. It's not makes me cries but the pain is actually lingering in the air. It's awesome!!! I can't wait for next chapter :)
Whitefall #9
Chapter 31: This is such a cute story! I've also read your other slice of life, and let me tell you -- you have such a talent for writing ㅠㅠ Thank you for writing and I'll stick to this one until the end. Even though the content and plot seems depressing, the little cute twists like at the end of this chapter make me so happy haha. ^___^