Fine

Knocking On the Other Side

We went out into the rain without an umbrella and without proper clothes. Kai had said that there was a convenience store nearby that was open late on Fridays. It was not raining very hard, but still my hair frizzed in the moisture. Most of the streetlights on our street did not function properly, and so we were enveloped in black. We passed by an alleyway where hooded figures blew smoke rings at us. I don’t know why, but Kai stopped for a moment and looked at them. Just stopped and looked as if he’d never seen anything like them before.

They glowered at him and then they stared at me. Young faces. Hard faces.

I was afraid Kai would keep on watching. But it was only for a moment before he turned his head away and we went on our way.

I let out a long, low breath. For three steps, there was nothing but quiet. And then, I heard the soft, heavy footsteps behind us. I didn’t dare look back. I stayed a little closer to Kai than I usually did. He pretended not to notice, but he knew I was uneasy. Neither of us had cellphones. We were walking along a small black street with rundown apartment buildings and it was getting very hard not to panic.

The footsteps drew closer. Fast, shuffling steps. How many of them were there? I hadn’t seen clearly. Were they going to mug us? I only had a few dollars on me. What could they possibly want from us? We looked like the broke students we were. They couldn't want anything from us. There were no reasons for us to panic. So long as we kept going straight, there was no way we could get lost. So long as I focused on the ground, so long as I didn’t trip, it was going to be fine.

Kai and I started walking faster and faster. We were almost running. We were panicking.

“How much farther is the convenience store?” I asked. There was a stitch in my side. He didn’t answer. I tugged at his sleeve.

He ducked his head. “I think we missed the street.”

Oh. It was fine. We would be fine. “Can we double back?”

“I don’t know my way around here,” he said, trying to stay calm. “Let’s just keep going forward. We’ll be fine.”

We went on, and after a while, the footsteps behind us seemed to slow.

“Okay,” Kai said. He sounded relieved. “Okay. We’ll just keep going a little more. They’ll probably give up after a bit more and then we can go back.”

Was it just my imagination or was the street constricting? No, the sidewalk was slinking away into the road. Grass and road. But it was fine.

It was all very fine until Kai stopped walking.

I looked up and it took me a moment to see what he was seeing.

 

Oh.

 

A dead end.

A wall painted black in front of us.

No buildings around us.

Footsteps behind us.

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ollie_wolly03
#1
Chapter 36: this story has SO MUCH POTENTIAL grrrrr!!! im incredibly sad to see that it never got to finish and that it’s been around 3-4 years already since this story was last updated. i hope one day you get the chance to come back on aff to continue this amazing story cuz ik i’ll be anticipating it for sure ;)
TKeyAlex
#2
Chapter 30: I cried hardly on this chapter. It was ironically beautiful and painful as reality was. Kris made a good decision and the moment I read the word 'strawberry pie', I burst out in tears.
mincupin07 #3
Chapter 36: THIS. IS. BEAUTIFUL.
I'll patiently wait for the next chapter.
MissFrost
#4
I love the flow of this story. It's perfectly paced, and I love the contrasting characters of Kai and Baekhyun. I'm obviously on TeamKai because he's so charming and the part where she falls in love when he danced is SO relatable omg, but also, I kind of see myself in Baekhyun so it's kinda hard to swallow some things about him haha. Oh and I love the OC's past as well. It isn't so dramatically tragic to the point where it's unbelieveable. I can't wait to see how this progresses!
cheesehun00 #5
Chapter 36: Omgg i cant believe i only find amazing story now from amazing writer TT pls continue on the story~
bts_groupie #6
Chapter 35: I read this in a few hours and I admit that I needed a dictionary for like 5 chapters lmfao I really like it though. I love the friendship between her and Kai
milkshakehoney
#7
Chapter 35: Kai dancing = LOVE <3
yeollshin
#8
Chapter 33: Goshhh how could this feel so beautiful and heart-breaking at the same time.... The storyline is interesting and it's working so smoothly. It's not makes me cries but the pain is actually lingering in the air. It's awesome!!! I can't wait for next chapter :)
Whitefall #9
Chapter 31: This is such a cute story! I've also read your other slice of life, and let me tell you -- you have such a talent for writing ㅠㅠ Thank you for writing and I'll stick to this one until the end. Even though the content and plot seems depressing, the little cute twists like at the end of this chapter make me so happy haha. ^___^