Forever

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Story between the famous loveline of EXO-K,

 

 

BaekYeol

 

Foreword

"I'm here. I already saw you.. you're cute in your pink polo." I said and I told him what he's wearing to prove that I'm saying the truth.

"Geez. Thank You! Faster Chanyeol."  He said.

"Don't be too excited." I teased.

I slowdown.. I'm so tired.. Not really. xD

"OMO!! What do you remember about this day?" he asked.

"Huh?!" I replied.

"Ugh! I knew it! You Forgot, today is our anniversary!" he said.

"Anniversary?"

"Huh?! -_-" he replied.

"Of course I know about that silly. Hahaha"

"Good Omo.. I'll kill you if you forgot!"

"Baek.. I have a present for you.." I said and I get the ring on my pocket.

"Really? Me too." he said..

"You know Baek. This is special.." I said while I'm playing the ring with my right hand.

I'm on the other side of the road..

Why in this area is not traffic? This is unfair!

"Yeol, are you still walking?"

"Yes.. I'm about to cross the road.. Don't drop the line.."

The ring fell..

Waaaaahhh.. It was rolling across the road... So I run for it!

"Okay Bebs.." I heard him say.

I didn't notice that there was a car. . . . . . .

 

 

*BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP*

*SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEECHH*

*BLAAAG*

 

 

I just found myself lying on the road.. I got the ring but I can't move.. i heard some people yelling for help..

Before my sight become blur, I saw many people around me.. I also saw blood on my hands..

Then fades out...

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This is my first attempt in writing a story.. The Internet connection Yesterday was not that good..

 

So I have to edit this.. I'm so sorry for some unmanage stuffs Yesterday.

 

Thak you .. XD

 

 

 

SoshiStan17
i'll post kaisoo one shot maybe later or tomorrow. lol

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FluffKin
#1
Chapter 2: I don't really like sad baekyeol but
your's kinda good
baka_ming95 #2
Chapter 2: Awww chanbaek why so cute;;-;;
It's so sad at the first, I mean Chanyeol got hit by a car but then he survived,, I was like "Yayyy ;;▽;;"……
Love your story and how you put the emoticons haha xD I also love how you express their love hihi^^
Anyway this is baka_ming95 from Twitter.. remember me? XD You asked me to rate this so.. For me it's 9 out of 10 points :33 minus 1 because the story is too short for me lol xD
top_byunbaek
#3
nice story..thanks
legna_angel
#4
Chapter 2: You have a good grasp of story telling. I do like the plot and the way you expressed emotion. Readability was difficult but that is just comsmetic and easily fixed ;) For a first try, it was very good :)

I hope you decide to write more EXO and look forward to reading it in the future :D
Andreagoon27 #5
Chapter 2: Aww the ending was so cute, but I cried at the accident part. I loved it.