Carnival Lights

Description

Your first date with your best friend Yixing.

Foreword

Being very productive these days.

Don't ask me why.

Yay.

Also, this is pretty crappy. I apologise. I'm experimenting with my writing.

Pictures and people are not mine.

- Ryukai

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saphira20 #1
Chapter 1: Oh my god...Thats the cutest story ever. I really loved it.
RukawaHolmes #2
Chapter 1: The lady below me is dying XD
I loved it, its so very Yixing ge :P
Its very picturable and I was blushing a bit because it was so adorable :P
XD I shall ignore the cheeze because it was so adorable ^^
Its amazing ^^
And you said you could not do it :P
animeotakupooh #3
Chapter 1: Can I die and go to heaven so that I can probably experience a date like this because this is just *keyboard smash but not actually cause keyboards are important*

Constructie criticism wise I can tell you that this writing style is really pretty good for sober yet magic fluff moment fics. You made a smart choice. This is different from your normal writing though and I can see that. Use it only if you are comfortable and not because you are forced to.

And last but not the least -

*extreme fangirling and hence breathing problems because YIXING*
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