Chapter 1: It was really funny and cute, until...the end. It wasn't Kris?... Oh my Gosh you don't even know how creepy this actually is o.o
But I loved it! The Hunhan parts, too. Hope you can write other stories like that :D
Chapter 1: During the story I wounder how?? Luhan was running and that man was behind him!! But I thought I had a problem with understanding the story...but I don't!! Now EXO had a problem finding whom he was XD
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