CH7

Ten days of life
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failed >///< i am sorry, seems like i won't writing again. thumbs up for anyone who has skill in writing . i respect all of you....

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It was happened quickly for both of them realizing. Suddenly, kai already pressed down against the couch while kris over his body and devour his delicious lips. Kris’ taste was like red wine, because he’d been consuming it during dinner. Kai opened his mouth a bit, letting kris’s tongue battle with his own tongue, hand slides in kris hair and rubbing it. The made out continue as kris’ hand make a way under kai shirt to his and pinch it, shriek come from his mouth followed moans. Kris’ mouth moved from kai’s lips to kissing and his neck while his hand move to kai pants and fondled kai’s covered .

“aah, yifan~ah”kai whimpered

Moans after moans come out from kai in between, hand grabbing kris’ hair to cover his pleasure. Kris stop kai’s neck and looking at kai fondly, But kris didn’t stop there as kris pulled out kai pants. Kai’s freed, as his being at unsteady pace making kai’s moan loudly. Kris’ kai’s at fast pace then slow his pace making kai feel uncontrollable with his delayed release. Suddenly, the grip kris’ hand on kai’s become tighter cause kai’s scream and his become bluer, the other kris’ hand trapped kai’s hand above his head so he couldn’t made unnecessary move.

“please, st

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I know you won't read this, but kinda disapointed because you guys didn't comment on my story. I know my story

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xxrhichiixx
#1
nice plot! author-nim jjang~
Malith29
#2
update soon.. author-nim
indi1hitwaunder #3
Chapter 23: Nooo...u redo the chapter author-nim =(
Nvr the less.. it make me even more curious...
Did d.o. jx make a random appearance? Hehe..
I am intrigue.. update soon.. =)
Dream_Jun #4
Chapter 18: i'm a silent reader but i choose to comment because i just love your story too much to have it stopped.your writing style is great and the plot is great.do keep on writing
indi1hitwaunder #5
Chapter 19: I know this is late... sorry if u feel that way...loving ur chapter soo far...getting even more curious in what gonna happen tat tao have make his appearance.. so kris hv a disorder and luhan hv a smodge crush on kris? Hw old are they?
taehyunkr
#6
Chapter 18: whay do you mean no feedback...??? look at the previous comments, they're all feedbacks. whatbare you trying to say?
well, i happen to like your style of writing, like hhat your other feedbacks say. it's your choice whether to continue it or not, whatever the case, i will support your decisions.
cutiekris #7
Chapter 18: Hello, i am so sorry for commenting this late. i have been reading your story since i dont know when and actually i usually silent type of reader and lately i ve been so busy and didnt checked your story this story is awesome and i really love your writing style and i was really interested what is going to happen but i just foind out this author note and i totally understand you me too write so i know it is really hurt when your reader dont leave a single comment. I know it is useless of me too say to you keep
writing but i hope you will update someday this is sfory is great and you have a talent dont give up! Fighting!^^