Fierce

Description

Title: Fierce
Pairing: taoris, light!kray
Rating: PG
Genre: comedy, light!romance
Lenght: Oneshot
Summary: Yixing goes on a trip back to the triassic period and leaves his younger brother under Yi Fan and Chanyeol's care; only for the boy to flee and end up at a dance club.


N/A: This is my very first attempt of writing a fanfic in english. Although I spent several hours editing and revising every inch of this whole disgraceful thing I wrote and also tortured many friends into reading it before posting, this is not my native language and I still can't consider it beta-d. So, I am very sorry about what you are about to read and I promise I'm excitedly looking forward to improving my writing-in-english skills. Thank you!

Foreword

 

The thing is, Tao escaped the first night he was under Yi Fan and Chanyeol’s watch.
In their defense, Chanyeol never thought Zitao would be the kind of guy to escape home and flee to a dance club.

“He is a sixteen-year old bastard! Of course he would flee!” Yi Fan shouted and Chanyeol giggled. “Stop laughing at my despair!”
 

“I’m not laughing at your despair! I’m laughing because you’re freaking out”

“In other words, you’re laughing at my despair!” but instead of replying back, Chanyeol looked at some point behind Yi Fan and goggled, shaking and pointing his finger.

“Yah, yah, yah!!!!!” he exclaimed. “THERE HE IS!”
 

Comments

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rupture #1
Aww it's so cute!! I love it. I hope you can make a sequel if that's okay.
Nice story :) good job.
ParkMiyoung
#2
Chapter 1: I really thought this was cute <3 but I'm kinda hoping on a sequel :p I just feel bad for Tao to always been taken for granted by Yifan and he never congratulated him which is quite rude. He's always scolding Tao and doesn't take him seriously, but Tao isso cute that I want him to end up together with Yifan :3