Life's .

Description

Jonghyun lives a bad life . He only has his uncle's remaining money to support him .
He lacks of education , will that help him get money ? Guess not .

That's when this boy comes to his life .

 

What will happen to him if this person comes and change his life ?

Will he have a normal life? Or end up as a wandering hobo ?

Foreword

First fanfic , first time really writing a story .  .

Not really good in english so don't blame on me D; . .

Erh so if I have mistakes , PLEASE , point it out !

So I can correct them  or you could . .

Anyways here goes nothing ._.

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Soshiss #1
Interesting plot :)
PinkCookie #2
Update soon plz I really like it
Badwriterr #3
@ Redberry1990 <br />
I'm babysitting them o_o! I'm not a mother D: and er ''You said that said said your right?'' what does that mean ?<br />
Eh thanks for reading thought , good job? e.e . .okay :O IT IS NOT GOOD D<! yah so i'm out of ideas. . thanks for commenting ~
Redberry1990 #4
Ah it's really good~ why are you taking care of five kids? You said they said your right? <br />
Well I did read it tonight, as promised, and good job!!! Oh I never answered your question as to what length your story should be. -actually it all depends on how fast the plot goes~ but I think it's going at a goo pace :D so keep up the good work~ <br />
Update soon 'kay~
Badwriterr #5
Hm i'm working on it , trying to make a long chapter . Thanks for the first comment! Oh and the uncle will be very rich :O . Like everyone knows him ;D so will be kibum ! Thanks for reading !
channa #6
hehe yay 1st commenter! :D<br />
update soon please! <br />
i wanna see what happens to uncle xD
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