First love- Part One

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Hey guys! This is BigBangAngel, well here is your romantic chapter :D

Again.... I posted it once... but then the whole thing got deleted..... D:

Here is the rewrite:



some time after Miss right came out:

 

Changjo: the stars are so beautiful

Changjo: but next to her eyes they are nothing

Niel: the sun is so bright

Niel: but next to her smile it is nothing

Ricky: the sky is so endless

Ricky: but my love to her streches out even longer

Changjo: *sighs*

Ricky: hmmmm

Niel:..........

Chunji: looks like the maknae line is happy

CAP: hey Changjo did it work?

Changjo: she said yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CAP: nice :)

Niel: I have beautiful  girlfriend

Ricky: I have one too :)

Chunji: I have my miss right :)

CAP: I have a princess and she is perfect

LJOE: y free and single!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ricky: hyungs we have know each other for a really long time....

Ricky: but neither of u told us about your first love

LJOE:

CAP: goodbye

Niel: No, please tell us

Changjo: yeah we told you guys our stories

Chunji: >.< please??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

CAP: E tu Chunji? *****A/N that is a line from Julius Casear, meaning you too.......?****

CAP: LJOE?

LJOE: ok... but first the others need to tell us all a secret each...

CAP: I agree :)

5 minutes later

Niel: I guess I will go first

Niel: this is my first girl friend

LJOE: we know that

Chunji: let him fininsh hyung!

Niel: I was really afriad that we would run out of things to say after 2 or three dates

Niel: I used to lay awake for hours thnking of funny or smart things to say to her....

Niel: I filled a whole notebook about what I should do or say.

Niel: I carried it every where

Niel: then one day she found it...

CAP: aiiiiiishhhhhhhhhh

Niel: and she pulled out one of her own...

Niel: we both had been doing the same thing....

Niel: it was so embarssasing, and that is why we are still together after 4 months :)

Changjo: awwwww!!!!!!

Ricky: ok *gulps*

Ricky: Mine isn't as sweet, but ya know.....

Ricky: There was this girl that I knew in middle school

Ricky: I had a huge crush on her

Ricky: and um....

Ricky. IAskedHerOutOnASortOfKindOfDateOneTimeAndSheSaidYes

Ricky:we went for ice cream and I ummmmm...

Ricky: I....

LJOE: what did u do?

Ricky: I forgot my wallet at home......

Ricky: so she had to pay...

Ricky: Then she never talked to me again...

Ricky: it

Niel: ouch......

Ricky: but I got me a really nice girl now :)

Changjo: my turn.....

Changjo: I fell in love with my girlfriend 4 years ago

CAP: what? 4.... did u say 4

Changjo:Yes hyung

Chunji: when did you meet her again?

Changjo: on the day i fell in love with her

Ricky: love at first sight?

Changjo: hell yes

CAP: so... you met her 4 years ago AND fell in love with her 4 years ago AND you ask her out TODAY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Changjo: yes hyung

LJOE: D:

Changjo: i was shy

Changjo: and afraid

Changjo: and not sure what to do

Changjo: i am such a loser

Chunji: hey bro, don't say that

Niel: we all had that kind of problem sometime or the other

CAP: we love ya maknae

Ricky: that is one lucky girl

LJOE: yup :)

Changjo: Thanks guys <3

CAP: your turn traitor

Chunji: hey!

LJOE: carry on

Chunji: jeez

Chunji: well this is a secret about my image

Niel: of course :D

Chunji: you remember the mv for No more perfume on you?

Ricky: yesssssssssssssssssssss

Chunji: Well, I could never do that to a girl.. ya know, when i fall in love i stay in love with one person at a time... for like a really long time

Chunji: I mean i don't even understand WHY any one would want to cheat... it seems wrong... even if you say that its cool and bad boy or whateva still..... its not right ya know?

Chunji: I don't think that made any sense

CAP: from you, it did

LJOE: from anyone else, it would not make any sense.... like at all :)

Ricky:  man that was DEEP

Changjo: dang......

Changjo: ANYWAY

Chunji: ur turn hyungs

Niel: ^.^ we're waiting

Ricky: hello?

Changjo: did they  just leave?

 

to be continued.......

what do you want to happen?

one of these senarios happend to me and my first love... guess which one ^.^

 

 

 

 

 

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milkcoffeemilk
#1
Chapter 82: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!! its such a funny and great story!!!!!!!1
kathleenxoxo #2
Chapter 76: Isnt it was niel that have the scandal
BanaWarrior
#3
Chapter 82: I seriously laughed with their antics. xD HUAHAHAHAHAHAHA
I think my fav parts were when they discuss pointless things, or when CAP makes Chunji and L.Joe stop fighting by impling they are a couple. LOL leader's power.
It would be interesting to see how the guys reacted to Niel's solo promotion. xD hahahahahahah I imagine that there was a lot of shouting involved. xD hahaha
angelnono11
#4
Chapter 8: my bias is l.joe :3 i love this story!!! i found it and probably forgot to subscribe while reading and now i realize i've read the first 5 chapters :D
IceGrayMelody #5
...haven't finished reading all, but it helps in lightening up the mood, thanks, really... And I didn't expect one dedication, thanks, again... =)
Ainull #6
Chapter 16: Realy good stories
Miss_Lovely
#7
Chapter 82: I love this so much!!
ShiroUsa
#8
Chapter 82: This is sooo funny just imagine cap filrting with fridge, so no