My First Kiss (Went A Little Like This)

Description

Jongdae deems that Joonmyun needs to be laid. On the lips.

 

 

 

Foreword

[a/n] well honestly no words for this, just read it. the summary makes it sound like suchen but it's definitely sutao! dedicated to jenelle (the yakult to my straw) and thank you brenda for helping me with the plot and stuff! and maybe you readers will like it too :)

 

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AwkwardKpopLover #1
Chapter 1: .......DAMN JOONMYUN JUST DIVED RIGHT INTO THAT KISS!! ...the pressureeeee!!! BUT Jongdae was a supportive best friend (ી(΄◞ิ౪◟ิ‵)ʃ)♥ and and AND TAO!! OH BOY!! HE WAS SO CALM!! AND SAID HE'D GIVE HIM FIRST HAND EXPERIENCE, YOU GAMEEEE!! AND WHEN JONGDAE WAS SCREAMING IN THE EAR PIECE I WAS DYING OH LORD!! I was literally a heap of crazy on the floor.......yep （‐＾▽＾‐)
lemon-deulop #2
Chapter 1: Very cute. This was adorable.
intanology #3
Chapter 1: Hahahahaha oh my god Jongdae was hilarious!!! Love him!!! XD

I really enjoy this story. This was so well written and I was laughing so hard! XD

Great job author-nim! <3
daseng #4
Chapter 1: This is cute!! It's cute! Really cute!! I love it a lot ^_^
veryimportant #5
Chapter 1: Oh. God. This. Is. Gold.
sxrxnghxja #6
Chapter 1: MORE PLEASE
oneoftheboys #7
FRICK CARISSA OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS
if i wrote this i would be hella proud, bc this is so so funny! I don't even ship sutao, but um maybe they can be my second suho ship after this omg.
Apart from exploding my feels, I agree with nelle; the flow was great, and it was super funny and refreshing.
Hahahah I love the Tom, or Harry bit and omg also when suho puts himself into awkward situations and when chen is screaming at him through the earpiece my goODNESS, I CAN'T BREATHE.
/pause/
and to top it all off, that last line by zitao had me screeching. "Firsthand experience, you game?"
PEOPLE SHOULD SAY THAT MORE OFTEN, IT'S Y (starts playing Growl)
okay, i'm out.
oh, and btw sorry (not sorry) for the incoherent mess i made in this comment. here's a mop, clean it up :)
BlueViolets #8
Chapter 1: omg c'mere child let me love you. I was on the verge of a nervous breakdown looking at exam stuff and this story saved my life ok. it's so funny and carissa-style and by carissa-style I meant it was funny, cute and a super fun read.
joonmyun is such a failure ok. what did I say, zitao doesn't even talk to him what good would his number do in his phone and wow, there he goes shooting his mouth off "jongdae gave me your number". why did zitao not flip him over and hold him by the collar against the wall and question why the heck would jongdae give him his number huh.
(and I see you included the jongdae-instructing-joonmyun-tables-away part c: )

and and and "Firsthand experience, you game?"
Huang Zitao I'll take you on. (;
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