How to Become a Vampire

Description

Oh Sehun longs for a life in darkness, and his best shot might be becoming friends with the strange and mysterious Kim Jongin. (School/Vampire AU, Some mature themes.)

Foreword

So, I have suffered horrible writer's block for quite some time and here's my attempt at jumping back in. I'm not sure how far this will go if it goes at all. Er.. honest opinions will be greatly appreciated.

Important Notes:

- I don't edit much, since this is just extremely casual practice writing. I'm sorry if grammar and spelling mistakes bug any of you.

- I'm not trying to be culturally accurate within this story. I'm from the US, and you'll probably see limited references toward Korean culture in general. Still, if you feel like enlightening me with your own knowledge, feel free to make "corrections" and maybe I'll consider things like that in future stories.

- This story was greatly inspired by conversations and past roleplays with my friend Kie (my Sehun muse~). I was motivated to write by my good friend Leftoh. I'm thankful very much to each of them as usual!

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Kitty_Min #1
I-It's...complet?...
b-but.. you will make antoher Fanfic..right?
'cause ... i really really reaaally love this Fanfic !!
So please pleaseeee pleaaaseee continue this Fanfic...pretty pleaseee <3
hellokpoplove #2
Chapter 8: please continue this I love it.
wonja2 #3
Chapter 8: I'm looking forward to the next story and hopefully the continuation of this one!!
kosong #4
Chapter 8: i cant explain what i feel when i saw this fic marked completed ._. it's like someone has snatched a candy away from my hand /ugly sobbing/
i hope you will continue oneday cuz i really it! i like the characterization too. the ending is too sad and left us hanging x(
anyway thanks for writing!
Kitty_Min #5
Chapter 6: oh god..
you really don't know.. what for i feeling i get from you Fanfic *-*....
and the Chapters from Jongin are great..!!
i really like your style *-* !!
You're an amazing Author!
i can't wait to read the next chapter <3
so please update soon :3
wonja2 #6
Chapter 6: the impression I'm getting of Jongin's family is that they're kind of like prime human cattle to the vampires...is that right?
kosong #7
new reader and new fan! ^^/ the story is so interesting!
update soon~
wonja2 #8
Chapter 5: I really like the jongin chapters, the background really helps me understand his character and gives him depth.

On another topic, your are one of the better writers I've encountered so far, do you have any suggestions on stories or authors I should read?
wonja2 #9
Chapter 3: It's getting interesting, and I don't here a British dude narrating in my head anymore! I'm curious as to the main character's motivation though, is he just bored?
wonja2 #10
Chapter 1: I think the idea is good as well as the plot so far, but the way it's written makes it sound like a documentary with one of those British guys narrating. This keeps the audience at an emotional distance. If this is what you intended, then everything is good. However, if this was not your intent, then you need to find a style or voice that draws the audience into the story. I'm not too sure how to do this, but keep in mind that this does not necessarily involve switching to another point of view (I.e. from 3rd person to 1st person). Wow, that was long...I hope you find it helpful!
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