ocean eyes -

Description

{OneShot/AU/HunHan} Sehun likes to think that Luhan has eyes like the ocean.

Foreword

Title: ocean eyes

Pairing/s: HunHan (they are legitimately the only -real- characters who appear in this fanfiction-)

Summary: In which Sehun spends his summer days alone.... until the year Luhan arrives.

Rating: T

Genre: ???

Warning/s: There's a lot of word vomit here which doesn't necessarily make sense.

Extra: In my opinion this isn't written particularly well, but Inspirited wanted to read it and I wanted to get it done and out of the way, and so voila. Please excuse any typos I make!

 

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Sehun likes to say that Luhan has ocean eyes.

They’re not blue like the ocean, and it’s not their beauty which enables him to liken them to it either (not to say that such gorgeousness is not a given, but it’s not the main reason). It’s the depth, the impossible, the contradictory wisdom and innocence that is evident clear as day, as ethereal as night in those honey-hued irises and those pitch obsidian pupils, the interlocking hands of a grandfather and a young child. Many events witnessed and so many more yet to be experienced.

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cherry_clover45 #1
Chapter 2: ... what can i say to you, my dear?? I DON'T KNOW. you wanted concrit, i can't give you any. my brain is still trying to keep up with this-!!
what a gorgeous story and i cAN'T BELIEVE YOU JUST LET EVERYTHING CRASH DOWN AT THE LAST SECOND oMG WHAT HE CAN'T JUST fOAM AWAY LIKE AT THE LAST SECOND NO //incoherency
your writing just... punches me in the gut every. single. time.
keep writing bby, no matter how awful you say it is it'll forever be beautiful to me <3
swabluu
#2
Chapter 2: ?!?!??!!??!!?!?!?!?!?!?!!??!?!!??!?!!? oh my god
cherry_clover45 #3
i'm only on the foreword and... //flips table
wHAT IS THIS IMAGERY AND DISGUSTINGLY BEAUTIFUL LANGUAGE I DO NOT COMPREHEND ENGLISH HALP--
InspiritedKissMe101 #4
you are amazing. this story just left me in an incoherent mess wails at you forever. seriously. ermagawd. /is still in some kind of stupor sobs.
you have a thing with angst don't you. -w-'' /flings everything.
THE HUNHAN HOW COULD YOU MAKE LUHAN DISAPPEAR ERMAGAWD HE WAS A MERMAN LMAO AND WHY IS THE STORY BASED ON THE HANS CHRISTIAN ANDERSONS VERSION WHERE EVERYONE DIES?!1
just. beautiful. absolutely beautiful. dude. idek how i am going to be able to write with you after reading this.
kthxbai
/descends into the ocean of feels.
InspiritedKissMe101 #5
so shrieks at you because it's finally up ermagawd sobs at you.
lemme go read this monster and i will post another reply okay? sobs xoxo
kittyhun #6
Chapter 2: Oh my God... so beautiful and I was listening Baby Don't Cry. What a coincidence ;_;
BoAJump #7
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