24/7 Review Shop [CLOSED & HIRING]

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 27/7 REVIEW SHOP

 open|closed|hiring|hiatus 
■ 06-07-13 - Shop was created [original name: dark chocolate review shop]
■ 07-??-13 - first layout ft. bangtan boys
■ 08-28-13- changed name to '24/7' and revamped; new layout ft. 2yoon

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RULES
 
 001. Subscribe, please! We may or may not notify you when your request is finished. Because we're such nice people, you may unsubscibe after the review is completed. ^.^
002. Comment: PLEASE comment after you've requested and after you've received your review.
003. Cancelling: If you would like to cancel, please tell us ASAP or we'll be very sad and mad, too.
004. Crediting: It is not required but it would make us really happy if you decided to credit us in your story description.
005. Password: Tell me the song you play on repeat! :)
006. Reviewer: Look below at the foreword to choose.
007. Reviewing the reviewer: I've developed a new rule. When you comment after you receive your review, please tell the reviewer at least one thing she did well and at least one thing she should improve on. That way, we can improve together!
Upvotes are very much appreciated~
 
 
 
 
 
 

WELCOME
Because no matter how good you think you're stories may be, there will always be room for improvement! That's what we're here for, to make you fanfictions even better than it already is. At 24/7 Review Shop, we'll point out your story's strong and weak points, what you're doing well and what you should fix. With that being said, happy writing!  
APPLICATION
Story Name:
Story Link:
Author(s):
Genres (Ex: Fluff, Angst, Romance, Drama, Fantasy, etc.):
Short Story Summary:
Reviewer: (you can choose one from the list below)
Password:
 
 
RUBRIC
Title: Does your title hook me in? Does it relate to the story? Is it just random?
Appearance: Does the appearance reflect the story? Does it relate?
Description and Foreword: Does your description reel me in and make me want to read more? Did you put the two in their rightful places or did you switch them?
What you're doing well:
What needs to be improved:
Characters: Are your characters generic and mainstream, or are they original? Are they realistic? Do they develop and change over the course of the story?
What you're doing well:
What needs to be improved:
Story Speed: Are you zooming through the story? Are you dragging out your story, with filler chapters everywhere? Or is it just right?
What you're doing well:
What needs to be improved:
Story Plot: Is your plot original and creative or is it cliched and predictable, just like the majority of the fanfics you can find on this website?
What you're doing well:
What needs to be improved: 
Grammar and Punctuation: Are these two extremely important elements correct? Is everything spelled correctly?
What needs to be improved:
Other: Doesn't this word basically speak for itself? 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

                       

 

 

Foreword



OFFICIALINSPIRIT
I'm the owner of this shop as well as the maknae. I'm not as harsh as the other reviewers on this site, so don't be afraid to ask a review from me! 
Story Genres I WILL NOT Accept:
Status: Unavailable

BTRIX27
My name is Rin and I'm going to be a senior in high school. I live in AZ, USA, tumblr is my life LOL and really I'm not at all that interesting of a person xD I can review any genre.
Status: Indefinite HIATUS

MORPEEEE
Yo yo yo! Mor reporting here! I'm the resident slacker here because it takes me a while to complete my reviews. Don't let that deter you though, I love reading it just takes a lot longer for me to put my thoughts down.
Status: Unavailable

HEAVENLYMUSE
Hi, I'm called Lulu. I'm Jungkook's noona but Zelo's friend. I'm in love with Hello Kitty. seriously, I'd go lesbian for her.Don't be afraid to request for me, I'm (usually) very nice and gentle when reviewing. Thank you~
Status: HIATUS

EXOTICANQEL
My name is Valerie, but I do prefer to be called Ally {p.s. I think I'm the maknae now. cx I'm turning 12 this year. } I live in the Big Apple, USA, and I'm crazy. Ask anyone I know.    
Story Genres I Will NOT Accept:
Status: Available

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ELISHA960809
I have reviewed for a while and I used to be a tough reviewer at first, but now I am more lenient with the stories that I read.
Status: Available
 

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officiaLinspirit
Panchil, your request is completed.

Comments

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Jinhwanderer
#1
Story Name: WIN Oppa!
Story Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/560328/win-oppa-jinhwan-romance-originalcharacter-win-teamb-whoisnext-bobby
Author(s):dennisse & DespisedSecret
Genres: Romance
Short Story Summary: Inhye, a foreigner came to Korea expecting to be a trainee, live in a dorm, and probably debut as an idol someday. But when things don't go her way and she starts living with the WIN boys, what will happen? How will her stars turn out?
Reviewer: heavenlymuse
Password:Baby I'm Sorry
YYS_SILVER
#3
Chapter 7: Thank you for your review^^
i just got on my laptop
so I am very happy with this
listi900 #4
Username: Listi900
Story name: LoveSick
Story link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/462893/lovesick-angst-romance-hunhan-baekyeol-otherpairing
Author: listi900
genres: Angst
Short Story Summary: It's because Xi Luhan, had loved his own brother, Oh Sehun.
Reviewer: Heavenlymuse
Gwentree #5
Chapter 11: Thanks for the review. I think you did very well with pointing out mistakes without pushing it to far, but I don't really understand the comment about the plot line being undefined.
-hypnotized
#6
Username: kpopimagination
Story Name: Pride & Prejudice
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/443715/pride-prejudice-angst-drama-myungsoo-romance-tara-originalcharacter-bap
Author(s): kpopimagination
Genres: Drama; Romance; Slight Angst
Short Story Summary: The girls from the very prestigious and high class Seoul Girls of the Arts are overly excited about two things:
One: The end of the year's school festival/showcase
and
Two: The return of the transfer students from Japan.
Park Jieun, who attends the school on an creative/arts scholarship, isn't interested. She only wants to focus on her studies and try passing her last semester at her college, without getting bullied by her fellow rich classmates. But now that the transfer students who spent a semester in Japan finally came back, what will happen to her so called plan of 'focusing on studying'? Especially when there's a rich jerk who caught her attention.

Reviewer: OfficiaLinspirit
Password: Sorry (Dear Daddy) by f(x)'s Krystal & Luna
listi900 #7
Username: Listi900
Story name: LoveSick
Story link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/462893/lovesick-angst-romance-hunhan-baekyeol-otherpairing
Author: listi900
genres: Angst
Short Story Summary: It's because Xi Luhan, had loved his own brother, Oh Sehun.
Reviewer: btrix27
Password: Growl by Exo
macchiato-
#8
Chapter 10: Thank you for the review! :] I'm not going to debate around the title lol some other reviewers have said the same thing, too. I wanted to use the synonym of 'thriving' and my friend looked up to an online thesaurus and found 'unthriving' in between, so I just used it without further consideration. I'll keep this in mind though for my future stories :) as for the characters; yes they were in their 20s, but Soojung had an autistic disorder so I made Jongin and Sehun treated her like a kid somehow. If you've seen someone suffering from severe autism, you might understand ;-) and thank you for giving me an overview about dashes and semicolons! I'll note everything and keep them in mind. I'll make sure to revise my chapters, too. Thank you, really.

A word or two for the reviewer: You wrote your opinions clearly and stated what's needed to be improved by giving out examples. That's a good thing because some reviewers tend to just state the flaw without pointing any mistake from the story itself. It would've been great though if you could expand more about the characters, as of how you relate to them, how you see them, etc. But that's my personal opinion! I'm personally curious about how people see the characters that I've built lol. Overall, it's a very useful review, thank you very much for your time! I'll credit you and the shop once I'm on my laptop :]
inspiritlocksmith
#9
Username: inspiritlocksmith
Story name: Only Sehun
Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/508231/only-sehun-angst-drama-romance-exo-luhan-sehun-hunhan
Author: inspiritlocksmith
Genres: Angst
Short Story Summary: Sehun is ultimately intrigued by someone who carries so much joy that he truly begin to question, does Luhan have heart wrenching secrets?
Reviewer: btrix27
Password: XOXO by EXO
LizDreamland
#10
Chapter 8: Thank you for your review!
I will try to make my story better~
(Jin's photo is handsome~^_^)