Story Name: WIN Oppa!
Story Link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/560328/win-oppa-jinhwan-romance-originalcharacter-win-teamb-whoisnext-bobby
Author(s):dennisse & DespisedSecret
Genres: Romance
Short Story Summary: Inhye, a foreigner came to Korea expecting to be a trainee, live in a dorm, and probably debut as an idol someday. But when things don't go her way and she starts living with the WIN boys, what will happen? How will her stars turn out?
Reviewer: heavenlymuse
Password:Baby I'm Sorry

Chapter 1: affies? (:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/530219/d-i-n-o-b-e-a-t-graphic-shop-open-for-business-graphics-poster-request-shinee-you-shop-postershop

Chapter 7: Thank you for your review^^
i just got on my laptop
so I am very happy with this

Username: Listi900
Story name: LoveSick
Story link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/462893/lovesick-angst-romance-hunhan-baekyeol-otherpairing
Author: listi900
genres: Angst
Short Story Summary: It's because Xi Luhan, had loved his own brother, Oh Sehun.
Reviewer: Heavenlymuse

Chapter 11: Thanks for the review. I think you did very well with pointing out mistakes without pushing it to far, but I don't really understand the comment about the plot line being undefined.

Username: kpopimagination
Story Name: Pride & Prejudice
Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/443715/pride-prejudice-angst-drama-myungsoo-romance-tara-originalcharacter-bap
Author(s): kpopimagination
Genres: Drama; Romance; Slight Angst
Short Story Summary: The girls from the very prestigious and high class Seoul Girls of the Arts are overly excited about two things:
One: The end of the year's school festival/showcase
and
Two: The return of the transfer students from Japan.
Park Jieun, who attends the school on an creative/arts scholarship, isn't interested. She only wants to focus on her studies and try passing her last semester at her college, without getting bullied by her fellow rich classmates. But now that the transfer students who spent a semester in Japan finally came back, what will happen to her so called plan of 'focusing on studying'? Especially when there's a rich jerk who caught her attention.

Reviewer: OfficiaLinspirit
Password: Sorry (Dear Daddy) by f(x)'s Krystal & Luna

Username: Listi900
Story name: LoveSick
Story link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/462893/lovesick-angst-romance-hunhan-baekyeol-otherpairing
Author: listi900
genres: Angst
Short Story Summary: It's because Xi Luhan, had loved his own brother, Oh Sehun.
Reviewer: btrix27
Password: Growl by Exo

Chapter 10: Thank you for the review! :] I'm not going to debate around the title lol some other reviewers have said the same thing, too. I wanted to use the synonym of 'thriving' and my friend looked up to an online thesaurus and found 'unthriving' in between, so I just used it without further consideration. I'll keep this in mind though for my future stories :) as for the characters; yes they were in their 20s, but Soojung had an autistic disorder so I made Jongin and Sehun treated her like a kid somehow. If you've seen someone suffering from severe autism, you might understand ;-) and thank you for giving me an overview about dashes and semicolons! I'll note everything and keep them in mind. I'll make sure to revise my chapters, too. Thank you, really.

A word or two for the reviewer: You wrote your opinions clearly and stated what's needed to be improved by giving out examples. That's a good thing because some reviewers tend to just state the flaw without pointing any mistake from the story itself. It would've been great though if you could expand more about the characters, as of how you relate to them, how you see them, etc. But that's my personal opinion! I'm personally curious about how people see the characters that I've built lol. Overall, it's a very useful review, thank you very much for your time! I'll credit you and the shop once I'm on my laptop :]

Username: inspiritlocksmith
Story name: Only Sehun
Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/508231/only-sehun-angst-drama-romance-exo-luhan-sehun-hunhan
Author: inspiritlocksmith
Genres: Angst
Short Story Summary: Sehun is ultimately intrigued by someone who carries so much joy that he truly begin to question, does Luhan have heart wrenching secrets?
Reviewer: btrix27
Password: XOXO by EXO

Chapter 8: Thank you for your review!
I will try to make my story better~
(Jin's photo is handsome~^_^)