AS YOU WISH

Description

Half of my heart

Half of my soul

Half of my breath

You take them all

 

How to live

How to feel

How to breathe

You make me forget

 

Death and gone

Live and stay

Hard to deal

Hard to try

 

Foreword

This is our first fanfic together!! Yay!!

Actually, Ellyemilyn wrote it all. I, Hannief, just editted it and added a little more =)))))

It's just a oneshot, a sad one :((

But enjoy your reading time and remember to tell us what you think!!!

Hope you guys will support us in the future XD

Comments

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ellyemilyn
#1
wow after almost a year, still have new readers and comments. hahah
thank you guys ^^
TaeyeonLover09 #2
Chapter 1: OH.MY ... Unnie! This is daebak! :D .. Btw , thanks for giving me the link ! :D .. Haha .. This story is so nice! <3 ..
shimizu69
#3
Chapter 1: angst, yay! I love reading angsts and this one is well written, really. I don't know but the scene with Eli and Kevin felt as if they had their last meeting and had to say goodbye to each other. and it was beautiful, because it's full of sadness and love at once, and something like... even if it's sad, they still were somehow happy because they could be together. I like it^^ and I hope to see more from both of you, maybe even a full collaboration? thanks for sharing.
Sunghyo95 #4
Chapter 1: Done reading. That was just so beautiful. I swear I was about to cry, and when I read the first 'she', I literally exploded into tears. This is just... Woaaaah. You too really should write more, it's was just so amazing, and touching. I really loved it.
Thank you for writting such a good story.
Sunghyo95 #5
Found it o/ I'll read it later, I'm not feeling like angst right now. But I promise I'll read and leave a comment ^^
HakieLee #6
Chapter 1: Why ???????
Why did KW have to die ???
Papa, I don't like sad ending T.T
fayrenz #7
Chapter 1: Its good! I hope you write more in the future :) Hwaiting ^^