In which Jonghyun is homeless and Jinki isn't

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“You can stay at my house if you want,” he offers, but even after the all the small talk they’ve just had it’s still really sudden, awkward, and spur-of-the-moment.

“uhh..” Jonghyun replies dimly, not sure how to react because although he and Jinki went in high school together, they where never really that close. Not close enough for Jinki to offer him a place to live, anyway.

“You need a permanent address to get a job right?I’ve got a spare room.”

Jonghyun is cautious. Jinki might become a serial killer in the past couple of years, after all. Having a place to live would be nice though. “Are you sure?”

“Yeah. I was planning on getting a room mate at some point, anyways. Better you then a stranger, right?”

Jonghyun sighs, “I literally have nothing, Jinki. I can’t split the rent with you—”

“—And I’ve got a high-paying salary working as a photographer for a high-end magazine. Stop worrying about it,” Jinki smiles. “Besides, with that golden voice of yours you’ll be famous in no time. Crawling in money.”

“Alright I get it. No need to rub your wealth in my face,” Jonghyun says, lifting himself up and at lest attempting to brush the dust off his pants. “So, where do you live?”

Jinki smiles again, already feeling a tug in his chest telling him he’ll regret this at some point down the road.

“Right this way.”

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Penginina
#1
Chapter 3: Mmm... Oh, Krysy your fics are golden.
kiwiandacai #2
Chapter 5: Ok, ok, I love 2nd POVs. I love, love them. They have a special place in my heart and I don't really know why, but I love them irrationally, unconditionally, especially if they are pulled off well. (typing out her love for a certain style of writing as if it's an OTP ><)

Which is the only reason why after reading Dorm in tumblr and liking it, I am moving over here to comment. Because I am a noob in tumblr and I have no idea how to leave comments in there, other than reblogging which seems kinda dumb to me, but nevermind, I am rambling. You have to excuse me, I am kind of in the midst of a camp now, and instead of doing what I am supposed to be doing and helping out my OG, I am typing away on my phone instead.

Anyway, writing in second POV is definitely not weird, and did I mention how much I love it? *looks up* Alright, I did, many times. This is pulled off really well, and somehow it really struck a chord within me and I felt that Taemin's emotions were reflected masterfully, while at the same time maintaining a certain detachment so that reading it doesn't become as painful as it could have been.

At this point of time, I am supposed to be waxing eloquent on how beautiful your writing is, but you have to forgive me, as my brain cells are fried right now (being under the sun for too long does your intelligence no favours), so just take it that I have done precisely just that--because really, I think the prose flows really well and there is no disjointedness within the drabble at all.

This is a long-winded comment I have written, and it is utterly unprofessional and directionless. I am probably gonna regret it when I come back to my senses...
shieryl
#3
Chapter 2: OMG, Chapter 2 is the one when they were on there Japan arena tour right? My heart literally stopped when I saw the video of him falling off stage. I that kind of incident never happens again.