When I Was Your Man

Description

I miss you

Why didn't I treat you better?

Is this a sign?

I'm too late now, aren't I?

I should've treated you better when I was your man

 

Foreword

A/N

Okay, the description , but that's because I prefer for you to read the story instead of finding what's it about before reading it.

So this was inspired by Bruno Mars' "When I was Your Man". I honestly couldn't think of a better title. I'm still a rookie so I would like comments on how I did. You don't have to though. Haters, feel free to hate because I don't give a so go ahead. Note that I use both of Lay's names (YiXing and Lay) and Suho's names (Suho, Junmyeon) as well. Hope you'll enjoy!

 

 

 

Reviews:

Review #1 - credits to Seraphic Request Shop

Review #2 - credits to Seven Simplicites Review Shop

Review #3 - credits to XOXO Review Shop

Review #4 - credits to Suicide Circus Review Shop

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Nakashimi #1
Chapter 1: Oh my fudging god...
This was so welly writen!! It was truly amaz balls!! Srsly author nim your jjang
kitchi #2
Chapter 1: Urgh. My KrAy feels.. My SuLay feels.. My feeeeeels..
I feel bad for Kris. They were perfectly fine. Suho wanted closure but somehow I feel like it's a bit selfish to do that then. The timing.. Urgh. /flips all the tables in the room
meraki #3
Excuse me, but please credit and link our shop and the reviewer for reviewing your story. Thank you.
KaraBear #4
Chapter 1: Okay this was an amazing story. I'm not too big on the Kris and Lay couple since I absolutely love Sulay but you wrote this very well. Really good job. Maybe you can write a sequel or something where they get back together haha :)
fr_unicorn #5
Chapter 1: it's completed already?? but this fic is great, i think :) this is beautiful fic. but i'm curious about why xing and suho break up. i think this story needs a sequel :3 hahahaha..
i love it's ended with Kray. i''m Sulay and Krislay shippers but if i had to choose one of the two, i'll choose Kray. it's so beautiful seeing them together #sorryKRAYshippershere
buuut, even maybe you won't make a sequel, i think this fic is great enough! :D thank's for this fic, author-nim :)
lovely fic you have~
ItsyBitsy_Orchid #6
Chapter 1: :'( NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yunjaefor #7
Chapter 1: I feel sorry for Suho but I'm glad that yixing ended up with Kris!
Lulu044 #8
Chapter 1: Suho just end up alone, why you poor boy come here! *hugs*
Anyway. xD This was really sad for Suho! You should do a sequel, because we don't really know the reason of the break up... And maybe (I just say maybe, and I say that because I love Suho and I don't want Lay to choose Kris over him... xD) maybe you could make Lay change his mind and go back to Suho. Or not.
Anyway. xD
GOOD FIC! :D
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