Chapter 4: Cute story~ I read the edited version and the other one, and I think you did a great job editing! I like that you removed the "POV" headings, it makes it look better and more seamless. And it looks better to describe the location rather than putting it next to the POV. The more you write the better you get, that's why I like writing so much, and what better way to practice than with Bangdae? Great job!
hello your story has been added to the b.a.p fanfic directory, ababyzdirectory, on tumblr. If you do not wish for it to be in the directory, please tell me and I will immediately remove it.
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