The First: Colours of the Rubik's Cube

Description

 

Luhan is the oddball with omniscient powers. He knows everything, including the time of his death. He gets a vision, an incomplete one.

It was a vision that acquainted him with a boy named Oh Sehun.

It was a vision that led to many ‘firsts’, and many regrets. 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note: This is a special chapter for 'Madness, Secrets and Regrets'. It's like an alternate storyline in the 56th universe, if you'll like...I'm so sorry for starting this. But I'm almost done, and I'm hoping this would either be a one or two shot. 

I have many special stories coming up because I'm a sad person during exams...

Title: The First
Length: Two Shot (11,000+ words)
Featuring: Luhan, Sehun, Yixing
Genre: Fantasy, , Angst

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Foreword

 

Luhan never really understood how fate worked, despite knowing everything else. ‘He’s an oddball’, Yixing proclaims, but one incident makes him go one step closer to insanity; one significant step.

He laughed to himself. A laugh that was much more like a muffled cry.

“What makes you love a person? It is that glint in their eyes? Perhaps it was that alluring shade of pink on their lips. Maybe it’s the soft sound of their voice or the way their hair dance with the wind.”

There was a pause; a daunting pause. One which was tempting to break, but at the same time, it would inflict too much pain if it was broken.

A pair of swollen eyes turned to Yixing. Coral strings were stitched around those beautiful sepia irises.

“Possibly,” a dejected guffaw was caught in his throat. “It’s because they would be the reason for your death.” 

ShadowYin
I feel like changing the title now T___T *sighs* Sorry, still working on the second part. I want to finish it before posting...but it's so long T__T

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julee22 #1
Chapter 2: YO I GET IT NOW. but not really? I thought he was under Jongin's curse?
ExodusOfLove #2
Chapter 2: All my tears could probably create a new ocean ;A; that's all I gotta say ;A;
jeonghannah
#3
Chapter 2:
This is absolutely amazing.
I dunno why, but I feel like the song could be "Butterfly Waltz" by Brian Crain {http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xqCdKOdX5FQ} I love this song, and I could see Luhan listening to this.
But the fic. It was perfect. Like, there's nothing else to say about it.
OhKrisus #4
Chapter 2: For the Rubix cube scene... I have no clue what song, but overall it seems that all [deliciously] dark pieces I have read so far go EXTREMELY well with Jaejoong's new song "MINE." I loved this two-shot a lot. I'm not a gal who can cry easily; not bragging, but honestly, this conjured up a tear or two. I love how powerful the emotions are. To be honest, I was apprehensive to read the second part (I like dark as long as there's no angst in the pairing- despair is something I'm into, though; I envisioned a lot of angst between Luhan and Sehun). In the end, however, I'm quite satisfied. Kudos, Author-sshi. ^^
rainingfears_
#5
Chapter 2: The way you wrote it... omg I'm crying like mad T^T
I'm totally speechless. In a good way of course. Everything was so unexpected. The plot, every single detail was just right, not too much not to little. Are you gonna write about how Kris gets into their lives? It'll be nice if you write a separate story or update 'Madness, Regrets and Secrets' ^^ Hope this wasn't too much to ask, I know you're really busy.
Anyways, THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY. Thank you for writing this(:
EnchantedAngelWings
#6
Chapter 2: Why do you have to write so well I can't--
The feels OMG the feels.
Just-
Just give me a minute.
//cries for two minutes
IS LUHAN GOING TO LET GO? BECAUSE THAT'S IMPORTANT IN LIFE, BEING ABLE TO LET GO.
...but I dot want him toooooo
//excuse my bipolar-ness I am a mess of feels rn
ShadowMaster #7
Chapter 2: i read this at 6 in the morning and not willing to wake up my body. and i crying like a broken heart girl over your story. The detail, plot and everything just so amazing! Oh damn! You make me become a crybaby T.T thanks for create such a beautiful heart broken story
rainingfears_
#8
Chapter 1: I think your writing has improved tremendously! There's more details, which draws me in because I want to know what happens next, line after line. Every line was unexpected, and I love it! :D
I really love how it's like a literature book, since I do enjoy reading literature texts that are meaningful and easy to understand. (Ironic, since I study Geography instead)
Author-nim! Awaiting for your update! HWAITING FOR EXAMS! GO GO GO!
-serena
#9
Chapter 1: I don't know if it's just me, but I feel like your writing has changed immensely. It becomes very detailed, it's interesting because I'm very invested in the story. Luhan and Sehun constracts each other beautifully here. Sehun might be tainted in appearance, yet remains pure-hearted. Luhan, well, he looks like a prince but he obviously doesn't think or act like one. But if there's one thing I'm unhappy about, it's the way Sehun acts like a freaking girl sometimes. He's cute but I'm here to interpret Hunhan as a platonic relationship (unless you intend for it to develop differently). That being said, I think this might be my favorite oneshot from you! :)