Faint lines and smudged paint

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First line is always straight, it's the second one that might ruin the picture.

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wishful
#1
Chapter 1: Wow. I don't even know what to say...

The stylistics of this piece make it clear just how organized it was. And usually, it's hard for people to throw in pure emotion into a piece that also has a large amount of organization. What amazes me is how perfectly you balanced the two. I know that that's something I could probably never accomplish.

Thank you for such a beautiful story.
miss-tery
#2
You ____ing messed me up. So bad. God, I don't even know what to say. That's it, I give up on wording a compliment. Let's just say this was a ____ing good story.
apfeltee
#3
Chapter 1: You know those stories you read and in the end it ____ing hurts?
It hurts right now because I want them to be happy.
ftkyles #4
Chapter 1: nice update .
actually , the way you wrote this fic , i think you wrote it
with full of emotions . so , you can go along with it .
nightlife6081 #5
Chapter 1: It's so sad... I love the way you wrote this, it nearly made me cry.
charmallama
#6
Chapter 1: This made me cry T.T
Noonanomuyeopo #7
This seems nice, I'll be waiting for you to update it ^^
nightlife6081 #8
Looking forward to the story!