breathe

Description

i ended it, yes, i ended it myself.

but how i wish i would be able to pull that decision back, to think thoroughly about it, because now, i can only wail in despair, begging no one to pull me back there, to comfort my friends, my family, the people surrounding me, to tell them that i'm alive, that i'm there for them,

that i can actually breathe again.

Foreword

silentdreams//2012
written for
'never stop dreaming' writing contest.
prompt: "i wished i could be free from all responsibilities and worries. without caring about anything or anyone."
warning: deals with the issue of suicide. may be triggering.

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anticlimatic
#1
Awhh, this is so beautiful. Do you plan on writing a sequel?
Chaee9
#2
Chapter 1: well written
beautiful words. beautiful story
Pastelskies
#3
Chapter 1: This was just so emotional and well written! You fully deserve your win in the AFF Exo Awards!
cherrylisa
#4
Chapter 1: /rolls on the floor
You never fail to amaze me....
all of it somehow points to me, yet the last sentence wasn't true for me.
/rolls away
frauleinhyu
#5
Chapter 1: found this story just now..
i love how you wrote this kind of story. you described so well the feeling from the people who regretting the suicide that they did :)
Everglider #6
Thank you for writing this.
I needed it.