When The Snow Melts

Description

 

The future lies before you, like paths of pure white snow. Be careful how you treat it because every step will show."
- Unknown

Foreword

 

Regret will only come after. It will never come before.

 

Have you look around and count what you got now?

Have you cherish those things and those people you got around you?

Have you praise to the God for what He has give to you?

 

Start the counting, start the cherish and start the praise. Before God decide to take it away from you.

Regret is merciless and can haunt you for the rest of your life.

 

 

And, this is the story of my deepest regret.

 

 

 

 

► An entry for slydeer's SNSD 'I Got A Boy' Writing Contest

► Word count : 7,821

 

 

UPDATE :

And won as best Seohyun Fic ^^

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namie27 #1
Chapter 1: I cried a river authornim. Such a sad yet beautiful story. You perfectly described the feelings of regret, unconditional and true love to YongSeo's character. Honestly, I was looking for a story like this but the other way around, wherein Yong Hwa was the one who took Seohyuns' love for granted. But, this story was astounding as it is. So simple yet you make your readers cried tons of tears. Gomawo for this one. ???

P.S.
As much as I loved this one shot. I also want a happy ending for both of them. And, I know that you posted this story years ago but if you can read this comment, can you please, please make an alternate ending wherein YongHwa survived the accident and his heart attack. I want to know how will you write Joohyuns' part of "making it up to him" from all the things that she did to him. Please, I beg you ???
namie27 #2
Chapter 1: I cried a river authornim. Such a sad yet beautiful story. You perfectly described the feelings of regret, unconditional and true love to YongSeo's character. Honestly, I was looking for a story like this but the other way around, wherein Yong Hwa was the one who took Seohyuns' love for granted. But, this story was astounding as it is. So simple yet you make your readers cried tons of tears. Gomawo for this one. ???

P.S.
As much as I loved this one shot. I also want a happy ending for both of them. And, I know that you posted this story years ago but if you can read this comment, can you please, please make an alternate ending wherein YongHwa survived the accident and his heart attack. I want to know how will you write Joohyuns' part of "making it up to him" from all the things that she did to him. Please, I beg you ???
aidays93 #3
Chapter 1: I am crying... so full of tears. it's a really great story,you're so genius.
malika #4
Chapter 1: this one never failed me crying..but i love it..how i wish you will come back and finish the happy ending version :)
JustAnotherUser #5
Chapter 1: Just want to leave a comment & tell you that I just finished reading this story again & I've been crying so much that my head hurts. ;(
tantalizingeyes #6
Chapter 1: i cried. this is too much.
yurissi #7
Chapter 1: i read this story for nth times and i cant help but cry whenever i read it.
this is so good.
one of my best yongseo story ever
unfeignedfaith #8
Chapter 1: Ain't that a big slap to the face? To take something so beautiful for granted and only realise how wonderful it is when it's gone. Heartbreaking, but...serves her right. This one's cool.
JustAnotherUser #9
Chapter 1: I think I have always been in tears reading this story & I dont know how many times I have read this story already. This story breaks my heart everytime. It breaks for Yonghwa because of the way Seohyun treated him & it breaks for Seohyun too because she was late in realizing her feeling for Yonghwa. The part where you described how Seohyun was missing Yonghwa & how everything reminded her of him always gets me emotional. I love this story that I asked my brother & my friend - both who are not on any fiction account as far as I know - to read this story & they have found this story to be really sad too. Really sad but beautifully written. We have agreed that your writing skills are amazing. Well done for presenting this emotional story beautifully, authornim. I'm the type who always loves happy ending but I guess this story is an exception. XD I think everyone can take a lesson or two or more from this story. Really.. Bravo, authornim. ☺
exo_stans #10
Chapter 1: good job authornim..u make me crying soo hard
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