Title: 3/5
The title is quite useful in engaging readers to view, comment and subscribe to your fanfiction. However, I have witnessed the use of "(X Number) of Steps to (..)" several times, therefore it isn't as effective as an original title, which demonstrates your creativity and has a bigger impact.

Posters & Graphics: 9/10
The poster was vibrant, colourful and energetic. You portrayed your creativity through the simple, symmetrical patterns combined with the colouful font and images - this balanced out the overall atmosphere of your poster and attracted the audience. However, there were some noticeable gaps which could be cleared by enlarging pictures (Jonghyun's image as he is one of the main casts) and you could've utilised more images - Shin Se Kyung, for example. I loved the way you had a different poster for each step as this envoked the audience's curiosity and made them anticipate your artwork - and the next chapter!

Description & Foreword: 9/10
The description was informative, interesting yet brief, I liked it. There were some noticeable grammatical errors "world started to shattered." which should be "world started to shatter." However, I acknowledge the fact English isn't your first language, so I'm being lenient. Your forewords were engaging due to the clear layout and use of colour. One of the good aspects was the fact you didn't include all the steps - this evoked the reader's curiosity.

Originality: 6/10
Initially, I thought your fanfiction would be a stereotypical, cliche plot. However, I was quite surprised to find out there were quite a few original yet eccentric twists in your plot. As these types of stories have become increasingly popular due to Shin Se Kyung & Kim Jonghyun's relationship I will deduct a few marks for slight lack of originality. Well done though!

Plot: 19/30
Your overall plot is quite exciting however your work is quite similiar to others I have viewed and I personally believe you should try and be a bit more creative with your writing. I think your plot, although enjoyable, needs to have more of your unique flair in. At certain parts I felt as if I had read this fanfiction before, despite the fact it was the first time I had viewed your fanfiction. I am impressed with your clear layout and thought behind each chapter - it doesn't seem rushed at all! I enjoyed your humorous commentary via Kwon Nam Gyu! From the dinosaur comments to the "This is not the reality I wanted." I found your writing interesting yet comedic. Some parts I think need to be developed more where you could elaborate on.  I would be more than willing to review your fanfiction when you have completed it in order to give you more marks. Well done!

Writing Style: 8/10
I like your writing style as it feels as if you are personal with the audience. You are an incredibly talented author (especially since English is not your first language) and I was very impressed with your vocabulary choices, although sometimes they were used incorrectly. I would like to see you develop this even further in order to create an incredibly powerful impact on your audience. I'm sure your readers will agree you have natural talent for writing!

Grammar: 6/10
I understand English isn't your first language, however I will mark in accordance to the grammar demonstrated in your fanfiction. There were some slight grammatical errors, perhaps a friend could help you correct these by proof reading or you could even use Microsoft Word which corrects grammar, spelling and use of punctuation. Some of your mistakes include:
"The sun shines brighly again" --> "The sun shone brightly again"
"...then stomp on it" --> "...then stomps on it."
"he had never like you and never will." --> "he has never liked you and never will."
"Sorry, I never want to do this." --> "Sorry, I never wanted to do this."
"I knew I have to this." --> "I knew I had to do this."

Overall: 3/5
An interesting read! I thoroughly enjoyed your fanfiction! You managed to combine two contradistinctive genres - comedy and tragedy - and engaged your audience. I am impressed with your fantastic vocabulary, which chapter-by-chapter is steadily improving. Perhaps a bit more originality and correct grammar would help you regain the marks I deducted. Excellent read! Well done!

Final Grade: 63/90 = 70%