A thousand Cranes and Ice-Cream (Long Hiatius)

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Credit to:

Editor, Co-Writer: saranghae0_0 

Poster shop website:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/320855/hiring-graphics-infinite-oneshot-poster-request-review-hiring

Poster shop:Infinitely U-KISS shop

Poster made by: Azn_melz25

Ideas: azn_buty, saranghae0_0

 

NOTE:

We worked hard on this and we did not steal anyone’s ideas, if this sounds like any of the stories that you have read, please tell us, because we really don’t know.If can, please comment what you think about the story:)Thank you.(WE WILL BE UPDATING AS MUCH AS WE CAN POSSIBLY 5 TIMES A WEEK:D)

 

 

Sleep Well, Goodnight (Baby Goodnight) - B1A4

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j_ZnxKSPJH8

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Description:

Yenji is a sweet, kind girl who always gets bullied, all because she was abandoned by her parents when she was 10 years old. Since then, she became very depressed.

Her daily life is very simple and boring, all she does is wake up, go to school, work and then go home and eat ice-cream. Yenji would always eat ice-cream, because when she eats ice-cream, she would remember her childhood friend, that person was her only friend...

Whenever Yenji was sad, that person would always give her ice-cream to eat, which made Yenji happy knowing that she had a friend by her side.

The sad thing is, Yenji forgot that person’s name, their gender and their appearance....

How was she going to find out who that person is?!

Foreword

 

Name:Jang Yenji

Age:17

Gender:Female

Main features:

She a fast runner!!

Has no friends

Brief personalty:

If you actually get to know her she is a sweet, bubbly and a bright girl who will make you laugh, she’s funny with out even trying to be funny and when she’s angry she is amazingly cute! 

She has a childhood friend but she doesn’t remember that person.She hates it when somebody annoys her or teases/bullies her, she’s nice but when somebody pisses her off you wouldn’t think she’s nice anymore.

 

 

 

Name:Jung Daehyun 

Age:17

Gender:Male

Brief personality:

Doesn’t like talking to people he hates,best friends with Youngjae. Both Youngjae and Daehyun love to sing,He likes to play pranks on Yenji and . He wears a mask when he’s angry about some one or something...Is obsessesed with drinking smoothies! 

 

 

Name:Yoo Youngjae

Age:17

Brief personality:

REALLY polite,but is not polite to Yenji. Sometimes teams up with Daehyun to scare her or annoy her. Yenji’s secret admirer!!And he is very rich!!!

 

 

 

Name:Kim Himchan

Age:18

Brief personality:

Devilish, loves fashion and could be erted some times, he likes to poke Yenji, hug her and kiss her cheeks.

 

 

 

Name:Bang Yongguk

Age:18

Brief personality:

Manly and is sometimes over protective when it comes to Yenji,he treats her like his real younger sister since his younger sister is always shopping or in another country.Lots of girls try to flirt with him because of his hot body and because of his manly,deep and husky voice.

 

 

Name:Moon Jongup

Age:17

Brief personality:

Jongup is a player but always knows his limits, he could be a little erted at times but tries not to be around Yenji since he knows that she would be a bit unhappy.He has different girls each week or sometimes if he thinks she is hot he would stay with her for  2 weeks but that’s not really often since he gets bored of them very easily!If a girl asks him out he would reject them since he thinks that only guys should ask the girl out.

 

 

 

Name:Zelo(Choi Junhong)

Age:15

Brief personality:

Also a player but stays with the girl longer then Jongup, well at lear he stays with them the girl for 3 weeks and before he dumps her... Yenji’s favorite dongsaeng since he is always cute and is always on her side when Youngjae or Daehyun .

 

 

 

Name:Kim Hyuna

Age:17

(She will apear later in the story but not soon though)

Brief personality:

Very loud is always defending Yenji and never lets anyone even Daehyun and Youngjae, if they do, BAM!They would be beaten up by her since she likes to work out a lot:)

She is more of a y type of girl, while Yenji is more of a cute girl.

 

 

 

Name:Seohyun

Age:17

Brief personalities about her:

She is always going shopping but she knows when to go so that she doesn’t piss her parents off ,she helps her mother and father’s company by being a model for them. She goes around the world to model and premote for her parents company. She is nice to Yenji.

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Big credit to:

saranghae0_0:for editing and also writing the story

Azn_melz25:for making this fantastic poster:D

Comments

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kpop_luver29 #1
Chapter 13: AHhhaahahha, getting back at daehyun?LOL
can't wait till the next update>.< Who's the people who are draging yenji?Update the next chapter I want to find out who it is^^and i'm new to aff
exo_tic29 #2
Chapter 12: Ahahaha, Daehyunie is so funny, looking at his watch that is not on his wrist bhahahhahaha!Ahhh, you authors are so funny.
And Himchan being a _______....?whoa he sounds like he went a bit far LOL!~can't wait till the next update FIGHTING
chooseme #3
awesome.. ^^
B2utyful-Elf #4
Chapter 3: WAAAHH!! >_< you guys are so cute; I didn't know you always celebrate when people comment or subscribe =) I might start doing that too, sounds fun ^^ Anyway, I was surprised about the trash talk in this chapter (you know, using bad words) It's your choice to use them, but please don't use them very often although I understand that some bad words really help express feelings. Sorry I had to say that, but I still love your story! I'll find time to read again! =) Keep it up!
kpop_fan4 #5
Chapter 8: please update soon author nim
nikki_jay #6
OMG, i love your story update soon author nim this is an amazing story!!!
B2utyful-Elf #7
Chapter 2: Hey there! =) I've had time once again >_< !! saranghae0_0 you did well hehe^^ Some freaky girl coming up and claiming crazy things? If I were DaeHyun I would be all like "NO COMMENT" ^o^ I'll try to read more than one chapter next time! Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapters and great teamwork between azn_buty and saranghae0_0 ~
B2utyful-Elf #8
Chapter 1: I've only had time to read the first chapter so I can only say this much: Hahaha! ^^ My Jong Up Oppa as a meanie? How cute is thaaaattt!! >_< Please continue on, I'll read the next chapters when I'm free again! ^^
KikisxD
#10
Chapter 2: I've read it and I'm going to quickly review it~ (**not an AFF Reviewer, this is merely my opinion as a writer myself.)

Okay so, first I notice some minor grammar mistakes, such as commas. When doing a comma, you tend to do this: "...piss her parents off ,she helps her mother... (etc)" but the comma should be like this: "...piss her parents off, she helps her mother...(etc)". Ensure you correct this maybe. It's not a big deal of course; still understandable. You don't do it everywhere, so before you post the chapter next time, you should quickly go over it to make sure you haven't done it~~ ^.^

Another note is that sometimes you use commas instead of full stops (I sometimes do this too but I'm trying to stop this habit hehe) or put in full stops without a space . Once again, this is just a case of checking over~~ Just go over it; make sure you've added the spaces and read each sentence; make sure it's the best-fitting punctuation. ^.^

Another main thing I've noticed is that when two people speak, you leave them on the same paragraph. For some readers (and myself), this was a little confusing but manageable. Whenever a new person speaks a new paragraph is made. E.G...

>>> "Hello Oppa!" I grinned, running through the corridor where my husband waited.
"Please don't," he began, teary-eyed. My heart skipped a beat and I felt faint all of a sudden. "I have bad news..." he barely whispered. <<<

BUT, even then... it's up to you whether you decide to put a space between each miniature paragraph or not. I tend not to, others do~ ^.^

Another is that sometimes you shorten words into slang which isn't the best thing to do, especially when typing a fanfic... so, for example, you typed "coz" and it should technically become "'cause", with the dash, showing it's shortened.

Well, I won't continue... I hope I haven't disheartened any of you both! I also write a story with a co-author and it's fun conjoining two styles!

Good Luck!