Menthols and Reds

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You crush me, with the, things you do, 
I do, for you, anything too oh. 
Sitting, smoking, feeling high. 
And in this, moment, ah, it feels so right.  - DBM 'Crush'

 

Seunghyun clutches onto his last stick, rubs his forehead with his thumb, thinking of starting it even as he was exhaling from the one already in his mouth. He could never figure why this was the one thing that always took him away from the real world, even for someone who doesn’t see himself much in it. 

Foreword

First attempt cos I am sleep deprived and high, listening to DMB, sharing fantasies with fellow GTOP smoking shipper.

Let me know.

I haven't written in a really long time. I don't have an editor either so let me know if it needs some.

Bits of swear words. About smoking so don't read this if you don't like to read about smoking.

 

 

 

 

*Original gifs not by me. Pl inform if they belong to you.

** Edit was by the lovely fangirl of my heart xo

***Words from DMB

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themightyrocklee #1
How do I say this? I wish I could write about something as ordinary as smoking a cigarette in as beautiful terms as you have written it. Everythig I write tends to turn to >___> This is definitely going in my favorites label.
Onepenny #2
Chapter 1: Such a random topic but beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading your one shot.
cia-Jiyong #3
Chapter 1: This was so well written!!! I absolutely love it!!
Mybabytop #4
The story is DAEBAk!! Writer is truly a genius! Being able to conceive a story within a convo in less than an hour!! Truly magnificent..
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