Fireworks
Pieces of a Shattered Heart
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Like fireworks,
Combustion of emotions
Bursting into colours
Of unsaid words.
completed 8-9.20a.m. , feb19, 2015
- naani - i actually wanted to insert 'flavour' anywhere in the poem...instead of emotions, bcuz that's too straightforward n idk lacking in thrill i seek for...? but looking at the definition of flavour in dictionary...i guess i need to refrain my love of nonsensical ambiguousness...sure it'd sound cool/nice/mysterious, but i feel it'd lack connection to readers instead of sth more conrete like feelings, idk...any opinion? no?...hmm...oh well...
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