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keyoppa_aina
#1
Chapter 31: I'm here! ^^ First of all, I am so happy to read about your comment on the title because personally, i think a title is very important to capture a reader's attention and I am so glad you gave that a full mark ^^ And the description, if it wasnt for the ending, i bet i would get a higher marks right? After you pointed about the ending, i tried reading the description again and you were right. It is somewhat too cheesy and spoil the mood, my bad, wuuu~ >< I won't comment on each of it because that's just too long LOL but overall, I am happy with your review <3 I have weaknesses on grammar [always] and I need to expand my vocab and improve my sentence structure too

"Like I said before I honestly have no clue how you managed to make such an unoriginal idea somehow original and unique. I loved that a whole lot. " <--- you have no idea how much you motivate me with this. I am so happy to read that, thank you! ;___; <3
Nhoxmew
#2
Chapter 33: Saw the ad xD Thank you very much. But I would like to add in a few additional things regarding my request :) I would like some words in the curse quote ("Hark! Hark now! ... a happy ending.") to be bolded if possible. The words are: regret, time, punishment, find, love, not, happy ending. If you can please bold them xD Thanks~
soo-ya-milk
#3
Chapter 1: Review form:

Author: kpopstan13

Author's link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/411909

Story title: Between Love & Friendship

Story Link: https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/519903/between-love-friendship-infinite-ljoe-myungsoo-romance-schoollife-exo-kai

Is English your first language? No~

Chapters length: ( long, short, varies) It "varies" depending on what's gonna happen in each chapter. The first chapters were quite short from 1000-1200 characters only but as the story progresses, it becomes unconciously longer.

Is it complete? Not yet.

How many chapters if not complete? 36 Chapters.

poster link: http://i.imgur.com/qFBRs9u.jpg
 
Critical comments will be welcomed :) I won't mind it seriously. I need those as an author in AFF. Please tell things honestly ^u^ You're great! ;D
Nhoxmew
#4
Chapter 1: Author: Nhoxmew

Author's link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/wall/333787

Story title: This Everlasting Devotion

Story link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/665794

Summary: Cursed with a bittersweet fate, as lovers, they shall cross each other's path in every lifetime. Yet as strong as it may be, their love will never be answered.

Two male gods, engaging in a love-hate relationship, caused massive chaos during a silly fight in the holy Palace called Paradise, otherwise known as Heaven. As the result The Great decided to punish them. A punishment that will last eternally.

" Hark! Hark now!
Mark my words, insolent creatures.
O how I regret thine existences; marry I doth.
Aye, time canst not be reverted verily.
Hereby the punishment thou deserve.
For lifetimes thou shalt find each other,
Love one another,
But I,
I wilt make sure thou wilt not have
A happy ending. "

"Hey hyung."
"What is it?"
"Do you believe in second chances?"

Genre: (but no ), angst, romance, fantasy, drama plus a bit of comedy and mystery.

Characters: Infinite's Sunggyu and Woohyun (Woogyu)

Rated (yes/no): No

Oneshot (yes/no): No

Poster link: http://i.imgur.com/v0OyzDd.jpg
EXO-TIC_12 #5
Chapter 1: Author:

Author's link:

Story title: The MatchMaker

Story link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/665333/the-matchmaker-arrangedmarriage-fluff-romance-you-exo-luhan-baekhyun

Summary:To love is a crime, a crime that is paid with the death penalty.

This is the law of society. However there is the other option. You can love the one whom society matches you with through the system simply called the "MatchMaker" where there are absolutely "no flaws" and "you'll love your match."

The "MatchMaker" is a system where all 18 year olds enter. They "match" you up with another girl/boy and you just simply get engaged, married, and have children.

But Byun Baekhyun and Cho Minji are lovers.

Secret lovers. Only a few know that secret. But still...

Secrets, especially one as dangerous as that, are meant to be kept secrets, because if spilled, you'll be lying in your grave.

But the "MatchMaker" had other plans for the secret lovers.

Genre: Romance

Characters: Cho Minji(OC)

Rated (yes/no) yes

Oneshot (yes/no) no

I'm still working on it T^T
Kate_Sunshine
#6
Chapter 30: I'm not so satisfied with the review, but anyway, thank you for the fast work :)
kaseume
#7
Chapter 29: Thanks for the review~It's really helpful~ ouo
DriBSK #8
Chapter 27: Hi. Thanks for the review.
But it took a bit too long. =/
i will take your advice in consideration in my stories (though i have 'given up' on this particular story)
Thanks
Kate_Sunshine
#9
Chapter 1: Review form:
Author: Kate_Sunshine

Author's link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/119172

Story title: Fix Me

Story Link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/670469

Is English your first language? -No

Chapters length: ( varies)

Is it complete? No

How many chapters if not complete? 2 (With a third chapter upcoming.)

poster link: https://24.media.tumblr.com/d8ce3c7176b3752971cd5f571748449e/tumblr_n13nb7l85H1r2xjzzo1_1280.jpg

Thank you ^^
kaseume
#10
Chapter 1: Review form:

Author: Aphrodite123

Author's link:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/395755

Story title: Breakeven

Story Link:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/650633/breakeven-angst-oneshot-romance-exo-kris

Is English your first language? no~

Chapters length: it's an oneshot~

Is it complete? yup~

poster link:
http://i1276.photobucket.com/albums/y467/skydrunk/BE1_zps20dbc039.png

thanks~ ouo