Chapter 4:

Waiting for a Train (Projection)

Pristine, white sheets followed the direction of the blowing winds. The sun was utterly blinding; it's rays shining brightly on the emerald blades of grass. Sounds of chimes twinkled across the backyard to the ears of the couple that was splashing water at each other, soaking the white t-shirts and worn down jeans they wore. Laughter could be heard; that lovely sound that could only be created by two.

It was a scene that would endlessly repeat in his beautifully psychotic mind.

Chapter 4: Green

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Kuusou #1
Chapter 14: I was really confused when I started reading this story. I was surprised by the shortness of the chapters, and as there was no exact mention of who were the characters in each one, I wasn't sure of what I was reading (and understanding). X )
At first, I wondered if the chapters made sense altogether or if it was just random chapters describing different things. But then the plot appeared more precisely and I got captivated. So, I was really focused on it afterwards.
I don't know if I all understood well, I think I'd have to read it again, but I liked it very much in the end. I liked how only short events were narrated in each chapters, but still the overall story was understandable.
Actually, I think that even though the story seems to follow one plot, there is not an unique way to understand it. I think we can interpret it according to what we have personally understood. (Does that make sense?)
Anyway, this story is really original.
motion #2
Ahhh this was beautifully written. Subscribed so I could come back and read this again later. :')
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