Chapter 11:

Waiting for a Train (Projection)

He stood under the rush of steaming water, relishing the feeling of warmth seeping into his skin. Even the humid 37°C weather didn't manage to dent his cold body temperature. It loosened the muscles that kept nagging at him, begging for relaxation, though he already felt weak. He gripped the side of the marble wall to keep himself steady as he languidly washed himself, not wanting to separate from the comforting heat. Pulling away from that embrace, with much reluctance, he stepped out to reach for the pale blue towel hanging on the nook. Stretching out his hand, he clasped on to nimble fingers that tightened around his.

"Myung Soo."

What a beautiful angel you created to save me, God.

Chapter 11: Fever

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Kuusou #1
Chapter 14: I was really confused when I started reading this story. I was surprised by the shortness of the chapters, and as there was no exact mention of who were the characters in each one, I wasn't sure of what I was reading (and understanding). X )
At first, I wondered if the chapters made sense altogether or if it was just random chapters describing different things. But then the plot appeared more precisely and I got captivated. So, I was really focused on it afterwards.
I don't know if I all understood well, I think I'd have to read it again, but I liked it very much in the end. I liked how only short events were narrated in each chapters, but still the overall story was understandable.
Actually, I think that even though the story seems to follow one plot, there is not an unique way to understand it. I think we can interpret it according to what we have personally understood. (Does that make sense?)
Anyway, this story is really original.
motion #2
Ahhh this was beautifully written. Subscribed so I could come back and read this again later. :')
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