Chapter 10:

Waiting for a Train (Projection)

Eyes were downcast as wracked sobs constantly interrupted the dead silence that the funeral naturally exuded. Seven men stood outside the building, leaning on the wall as people filtered in and out to pay their condolences.

"What was the cause?"

"She drowned..."

Eyes narrowed, "But she was good at swimming."

"No, not from the water."

"Then what?"

"From her own blood."

Chapter 10: Asphyxiation

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Kuusou #1
Chapter 14: I was really confused when I started reading this story. I was surprised by the shortness of the chapters, and as there was no exact mention of who were the characters in each one, I wasn't sure of what I was reading (and understanding). X )
At first, I wondered if the chapters made sense altogether or if it was just random chapters describing different things. But then the plot appeared more precisely and I got captivated. So, I was really focused on it afterwards.
I don't know if I all understood well, I think I'd have to read it again, but I liked it very much in the end. I liked how only short events were narrated in each chapters, but still the overall story was understandable.
Actually, I think that even though the story seems to follow one plot, there is not an unique way to understand it. I think we can interpret it according to what we have personally understood. (Does that make sense?)
Anyway, this story is really original.
motion #2
Ahhh this was beautifully written. Subscribed so I could come back and read this again later. :')
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