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✶ chase me to the e n d | one-shot writing contest [CLOSED]

Judging will be based on the following:

-Use of prompt

-Plot development/Flow

-Characterization

-Originality

-Grammar

-Bonus

 

What I won't judge your story on:

-Character choice

-Posters/background/etc

-Description/Foreword

 

Allow me explain how I judge a story.

I judge mostly on style, on how you use your words and how you convey the feelings of the characters. Something I focus a lot on is the connotative meaning behind a word. Often times, I would read a beautifully written story, only to find one out-of-place word, and I'd spend ten minutes (I'm exaggerating) sitting there, staring at the screen, wondering why the author used that word. Now, something you guys should know is that I really, really, really like metaphors. A story can never have too many metaphors. However, you have to be able to employ them properly and appropriately, and that's the hard part.

Some things I don't focus particularly on are the plot and the grammar. I know, I know, absurd, isn't it? I mean, how can a good story have a bad plot or have bad grammar? 

I'm not saying a story can have a bad plot and bad grammar at the same time and still win first place, unless that's the writer's style, and he/she manages to execute it perfectly. What I'm saying is that a mindblowing, suspenseful plot is not always going to win first place, or at least not to me.  Yes, I adore plot twists, and yes, I love suspense, but I love a good writing style more. You can give me a story describing, I don't know, Sunggyu eating ice cream, and if the writing is crazy good, I might just give you first place, even if the plot itself is nearly nonexistent. But seriously, if you manage to make a piece of writing about Sunggyu eating a piece of art, you deserve first place, oh my god. So, if I had to choose between a story with terrible grammar and an awesome plot, and one with a stupid, cliche plot and amazing writing, I might just pick the latter (because I'm oh-so-in-love with good writing styles). And besides, a good plot is hard to develop in a five thousand word story.

Why do I not judge hard on grammar?

It's because I myself am not that good at grammar, and I can only manage the basics. Also, in my opinion, a story with minor grammar mistakes does not mean it's a bad story. I've read a tear jerking story with quite bad grammar (not to the point where I could hardly understand it, but to the point where I got somewhat annoyed at the verb tenses), but I loved it. Now, I'm not contradicting what I said earlier about the writing style. The reason why I loved the story so much was based heavily on the style. It was clear, innocent, and terribly fluffy. The characters' feelings were so vividly portrayed, even though the story lacked large vocabulary (something else I don't focus on). If you have a few plural/singular errors in the midst of your awesome writing, I will ignore it, LOL. I have huge troubles with those, actually >.>

So yeah, guys, I focus a lot on the writing style. It's a huge chunk of your score.

Even though I don't judge hard on the plot, I am quite strict on the flow of the story and characterization. Yes, I know flow is quite hard to grasp in an one-shot, but hey, it's still important. I'm actually fine with slow-paced stories; it's the sped up ones that get to me (not that I'm saying you should drag out the story as much as possible or anything. As for characterization, if one character happens to show two different personalities in the story, there had better be a good explanation for it.

Okay, so say, writing style is 40%, plot and grammar is 20%, flow and characterization is 30%, the last 10% will be how you've incorporated the prompt in your story.

No, the prompt does not have to be out in the reader's face. It can be stealthily woven in the story, so lightly hinted that you'd have to read and re-read it to finally grasp the relationship. And yes, I'm asking for a paragraph on how your story relates to your prompt because I'm afraid I might not comprehend it properly and judge the stories incorrectly because of that, lol.

Bonus points will be an extra boost to your score if the story really touched me, and you can earn up to five. I did add a bonus point thing in the prompt section, and it is for you to somehow include Louis Tomlinson with a banana. Five points will automatically go to the one that manages to do it in a way that seems the least absurd to me. And since most of the prompts are quite angsty, I am very curious as of how you guys will add it in.

Anyways, I think that's enough useless blabbering on my account. If I think of anything else, I supposed I will add it here. I'm sorry if I sound like an idiot in this chapter, guys. I just wanted to show you what I'll be looking for in your story. :D

ASDFG, I can't wait to read them!

 

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A/N: Oh god, I hope I don't sound like one of those sophomoric es that I hate. I really. really. really. hope I don't, lol. 

Honestly, I'm quite nervous in giving reviews to the winners ;____; I'm like thinking, "What right do I have?" 

And especially since I frequently complain on reviewers and stuff. I hope I don't become a freakin' hypocrite and make the same mistakes I keep telling others not to make. If I do, I give y'all permission to give me a good, harsh slap in the face.

Anyways, g'night guys! I'm going to go back to writing my HunHan, lol.

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jongstitch
#1
Chapter 11: Awww thank you for that review!! ^^

About the title? Well, it meant that Jongup couldn't "discover" himself... and all his life, he'd been doing what everyone else had forced him to do. So he just wanted to become someone whom he could "understand". Lol does that make sense? It sounded better in my head >< But yeahh, it's kind of a hidden meaning that people probably wouldn't catch... so I understand why ^^"

And my grammatical errors.... lol I must be really blur to miss those >.<

I never really specified what really happened on the 26th to make it special... though I thought that readers might be able to guess when I put in the flashback part while Jongup was dancing. So, the 26th was actually the date Hae Rin and Jongup first met :)

Yeahh.... I need to stop rushing my stories >< I'm terrible at sticking to one pace, cos I get too excited to move on to the next part xD

Really? You like my writing style? Wow, that's a first >.< But I agree with my sentences being very repetitive.... I just don't know how to vary them...

And AWWWW.... I'm glad you actually picked out your favourite sentences ^^ It's nice to know that someone actually took note of them :)

Thank you, again.... For hosting this contest and writing this review and EVERYTHING<3
ErisChaotica
#2
Chapter 12: Thank you so much for the review! I'm actually surprised that I got as high of a score as I did. I was expecting worse. I'm glad you liked the story since when I wrote it, I felt like it was kind of cliched. I was surprised by how many people liked it. It's one of my most popular oneshots to date, and my oneshots usually get neglected compared to my longer works.

Regarding the word "would," it's not always used as part of a conditional statement (with "if"). The way I was using it was simply as the past tense of "will."

I agree about Sungyeol's characterization. He had a voice in the story, but it wasn't strong and distinct enough. Part of the reason there was a disparity between how Jihyun saw him and his actual character is simply because she didn't fully understand him. The other part of it is because I personally view Sungyeol in this way: on the outside, he has that "choding" image that everyone associates with him, but in fact, he's not particularly innocent or immature. Being a prankster does require some wiles, after all, and he does have the capacity to think deeply. Extroverts don't have to be childish or shallow by default.

I also get what you mean about the beginning. There were parts of the narration that sounded oddly formal, and that's because in general, my writing takes a more formal tone. Since I was writing in first person, I had to remember that the narration needed to sound like my character and not like me, and it took me a while to find the characters' inner voices, I guess.

Thank you again, and I know how you feel about the autosave thing since I've lost many a blog post because of it. I think Jason's probably working on that feature. My recommendation is that you type these kinds of things in a word processor first (and save it) to avoid losing things.
jongstitch
#3
Chapter 11: Gosh, you're not a failure lol!!! xD
I really like it!!<3
It has pretty colours and nice blending and everything ^^
thankyou :)
fried-chicken
#4
Chapter 10: oh man
i never joined but congrats to the people who made it! ♥

/off to read entries
jongstitch
#5
Congratz to everyone who participated!! :D
lol I didn't think I'd actually get an honourable mention >.<
And you know.... I live in Singapore :/
Do you REEEAAALLY want to send me a wallet card and infinite collection card?
Because I think it's gonna cost you a lot, isn't it? ^^
ErisChaotica
#6
Chapter 9: Wow, this is an honor. First time I've ever won first place in a contest. :O Thank you so much for hosting this contest!
Congratulations to the other winners as well! :D

Wait, when she accepted Sungyeol the first time they met or when they saw each other again in the future? But you're definitely justified in questioning that...I won't brick you. xD
OnASnowyDay
#7
Chapter 9: Congratulations! May I know what score I got? ouo