Chapter 3: So beautiful.. it's amazing just how well you understand them.
This was really beautiful.

Chapter 3: You put your heart into words. Only an EXO real admirer can describe them like that. I'm your admirer.

Chapter 3: wow...this was just beautiful. You have your way with words.
I love your writing style and this story.

I came here for the second time and my reaction is still the same : how is that it does not have comments yet? Then I remember why I did not let one for the first chapter and it is because this story may be a little too good for us to simply review it without eitheir looking dumb or feeling guilty for not being deep enough. Maybe it is putting only one tag kaihan which prevent you from accessing to readers (try the lukai tag)...
I sincerely want to talk about this story but it is hard to say anything as there is no real action (yet?) and as it is just beautifuly written so that it is impossible to give any advise or to criticize. So I do not have lots to say except that I am pleasantly surprised to find something that promising here and that I can never have enough of descriptions of Jongin dancing and yours are part of my favourite. I mean your whole chapter is a description of dramatic Jongin struggling for fame and it is not boring at all, you can add some more anytime. However crazy I may be for tragic little Jongin, I'd like to know more about his relationship with Luhan -but curiosity can wait, this fic would look bad if it is rushed-.
I am looking forward your next update :)