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Reincarnation: ≈PIRATES ERA≈
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"What the hell?!" Gangmin ran towards Raera and Chanyeol "Put her down" Gangmin shouted   "Why?" Chanyeol asked "She's my fiancee! Put. her. down. now." Gangmin glared   "So?" Chanyeol didn't even flinched under his glared "Why you! How dare you crashed our party!" Gangmin shouted   While Gangmin was cursing and scolding while shouting at Chanyeol Chanyeol had this 'I'm-bored-can-I-go-now?' face while he was still holding Raera in one arm while his other hand in his pocket "And do you how much the chandelier and this party cost? It cost all of my wife's savings!" Gangmin shouted as gasped filled the room   Chanyeol snapped out from his daze and looked at Gangmin "You used her money?" Chanyeol raised his eyebrows at Gangmin   In one move, Chanyeol took out his gun and shot Gangmin in the brain "What kind of man are you?" Chanyeol muttered as he glared at Gangmin while holding his gun   People started to panicked and started to ran away after seeing the dead body "You're dead right?" Chanyeol put his gun down as he kicked Gangmin a few times, checking if he is going to wake up again "Your dead?" Chanyeol peered at Gangmin's face which shows no sign of waking up "Good" Chanyeol smiled satisfied   "Bring in the guards!!!" someone shouted "Looks like its out cue to leave" Chanyeol whispered "Suho" he shouted before he ran towards the entrance with Raera on his shoulder   "Come on guys" Suho waved as he and the rest f
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MarshmallowL6666 #1
That was probably one of the best stories i have ever read
Lion_Heart36
#2
Chapter 3: Ok, so, where is the setting? Because now you are specifying clothes but they don't match Korean historical style clothing. Sure this could be an alternative universe, but we don't know that. I don't mean to be picky, but I know a lot about pirates and that time period, and also quiet a bit about Asian pirates and that is quiet a bit different. Also what I forgot to state in my comment in chapter one is that their speech is too modern as well, which makes me even more confused. Also what I forgot to state about chapter two is I don't now what anyone is doing. I don't know where they are, what anyone looks like, if they are sitting or standing or what. Did Baekhyun enter a room, or just randomly bring up the subject and already have been there, but where is there? I really don't want to seem mean or anything but I wanted to at least give some constructive criticism because based on many comments it seems this story has a lot going for it, and so far it has some great ideas.
Lion_Heart36
#3
Chapter 1: Uhm...what time period is this? Becuase you don't describe their clothes at all, and you said this was going back to a time there were pirates and if that is so...there wouldn't be vinyl players. In the 1600s if someone wanted music, it would be played live. If this is a more modern time I would like to know when, that way I can picture what they are wearing better since you don't specify, although it still wouldn't be in the time of vinyl players, because pirates were very uncommon, basically non existent, by that time period.
gemmymars #4
Chapter 63: Aww~ this story's so good and I liked how it was different from the other stories I've read so far^^ I really enjoyed reading the story authornims!!^
VICTORYiaLee #5
Chapter 63: Awwwwww. The ending!! >.< FEELS!!
cocoflower #6
Chapter 13: Lol , ha this is cute , cute kai ~
cocoflower #7
Chapter 10: Wifey... chanyeol.... ok ... kai blushes ... Lol
cocoflower #8
Chapter 8: I love this... nice
cocoflower #9
Chapter 6: LOL Chanyeol just to find a wifey ahaha xDD
cocoflower #10
Chapter 2: Lol suho ok