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Reincarnation: ≈PIRATES ERA≈
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Raera and Rin jumped a bit as they heard the door bang opened Everyone stared at the entrance door only to be greeted by a very tall grinning boy- man Raera and Rin stared at the grinning man for a moment, wondering who he is   Suddenly one of the noblemen daughter's shouted "PIRATES!"  "Pirates?" Raera and Rin looked at each other trying to register in their minds "PIRATES?!" they looked back at the door   Another 5 guys, or should we say Pirates, walked in standing either beside or behind the grinning man The grinning man, or should we say Chanyeol, started walking down the stairs as he scans everyone in the room No one dared to make a move   Chanyeol started scanning all the girls in the room He walked from one girl to one girl    He pulled their shoulder, look at them one by one before moving on to the next girl "Nope" "No" "Nu-uh"   He pulled a girl's shoulder and turned her around "What the-" the girl was about to cursed the person until she saw Chanyeol "Hello there~" She battled her eyelashes flirtly   Chanyeol looked at her up and down  "Plastic" he said with a merciless pokerface before moving on to the next girl He could hear the girl throwing a tantrum but he just ignore her   "I think I should go to my parents" Raera whispered to Rin before walking away As Raera leaves, Chanyeol scan the girls near Rin He looked at Rin and just turned away without saying anything   "Am I that un-attractive? Wo
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MarshmallowL6666 #1
That was probably one of the best stories i have ever read
Lion_Heart36
#2
Chapter 3: Ok, so, where is the setting? Because now you are specifying clothes but they don't match Korean historical style clothing. Sure this could be an alternative universe, but we don't know that. I don't mean to be picky, but I know a lot about pirates and that time period, and also quiet a bit about Asian pirates and that is quiet a bit different. Also what I forgot to state in my comment in chapter one is that their speech is too modern as well, which makes me even more confused. Also what I forgot to state about chapter two is I don't now what anyone is doing. I don't know where they are, what anyone looks like, if they are sitting or standing or what. Did Baekhyun enter a room, or just randomly bring up the subject and already have been there, but where is there? I really don't want to seem mean or anything but I wanted to at least give some constructive criticism because based on many comments it seems this story has a lot going for it, and so far it has some great ideas.
Lion_Heart36
#3
Chapter 1: Uhm...what time period is this? Becuase you don't describe their clothes at all, and you said this was going back to a time there were pirates and if that is so...there wouldn't be vinyl players. In the 1600s if someone wanted music, it would be played live. If this is a more modern time I would like to know when, that way I can picture what they are wearing better since you don't specify, although it still wouldn't be in the time of vinyl players, because pirates were very uncommon, basically non existent, by that time period.
gemmymars #4
Chapter 63: Aww~ this story's so good and I liked how it was different from the other stories I've read so far^^ I really enjoyed reading the story authornims!!^
VICTORYiaLee #5
Chapter 63: Awwwwww. The ending!! >.< FEELS!!
cocoflower #6
Chapter 13: Lol , ha this is cute , cute kai ~
cocoflower #7
Chapter 10: Wifey... chanyeol.... ok ... kai blushes ... Lol
cocoflower #8
Chapter 8: I love this... nice
cocoflower #9
Chapter 6: LOL Chanyeol just to find a wifey ahaha xDD
cocoflower #10
Chapter 2: Lol suho ok