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Reincarnation: ≈PIRATES ERA≈
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"RUM?!!" Rin spitted out her drink "Why? What's wrong?" Kai furrowed his eyebrows   "What's wrong? What's wrong?! Damn!! My image is ruined!!!" Rin put her head down on the table and hid it with her arms "What do you mean?" Kai stood up and crouched beside her   "I don't have high tolerance of alcohol" Rin muttered "I'm sorry! I should have stop you! I didn't know" Kai bit his bottom lip as he put a hand on Rin's shoulder   "Its fine- argh!! My head hurts..." Rin held her temple with her hand as she closes her eyes "Does it hurt that bad?" Kai leans in to looked at her face   "Not really~" Rin smiled as she opened her eyes "Are you okay?" Kai furrowed his eyebrows   "Okay? I'm more than okay! I'm wonderful! Fantastic!" Rin put her arms up and waves her arms up and down "Err..." Kai blinked at her behaviour Rin suddenly put her arms around Kai's neck   "Kai oppa~" she said in a half girly half seductive tone as she giggled "R-Rin?" Kai widened his eyes "Yes~" Rin rested her head against Kai's shoulder   Kai bit his lower lip as Rin's breath tingled agaisnt his neck "Rin will you stop that please?" Kai closed his eyes *She's drunk.. She's drunk.. She's drunk..* Kai kept chanting in his mind "Stop what Kai oppa? I didn't even do anything" Rin pouted as she played with Kai collar with her fingers   "Seriously Rin.. Stop it" Kai sighed  Rin went near Kai's ear "I didn't even do anything Oppa~ Or do you want to do something?" she smirked as she his ear lobe before giggling *She's drunk- Dammit!!!* Kai stopped chanting as he pushed Rin away
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MarshmallowL6666 #1
That was probably one of the best stories i have ever read
Lion_Heart36
#2
Chapter 3: Ok, so, where is the setting? Because now you are specifying clothes but they don't match Korean historical style clothing. Sure this could be an alternative universe, but we don't know that. I don't mean to be picky, but I know a lot about pirates and that time period, and also quiet a bit about Asian pirates and that is quiet a bit different. Also what I forgot to state in my comment in chapter one is that their speech is too modern as well, which makes me even more confused. Also what I forgot to state about chapter two is I don't now what anyone is doing. I don't know where they are, what anyone looks like, if they are sitting or standing or what. Did Baekhyun enter a room, or just randomly bring up the subject and already have been there, but where is there? I really don't want to seem mean or anything but I wanted to at least give some constructive criticism because based on many comments it seems this story has a lot going for it, and so far it has some great ideas.
Lion_Heart36
#3
Chapter 1: Uhm...what time period is this? Becuase you don't describe their clothes at all, and you said this was going back to a time there were pirates and if that is so...there wouldn't be vinyl players. In the 1600s if someone wanted music, it would be played live. If this is a more modern time I would like to know when, that way I can picture what they are wearing better since you don't specify, although it still wouldn't be in the time of vinyl players, because pirates were very uncommon, basically non existent, by that time period.
gemmymars #4
Chapter 63: Aww~ this story's so good and I liked how it was different from the other stories I've read so far^^ I really enjoyed reading the story authornims!!^
VICTORYiaLee #5
Chapter 63: Awwwwww. The ending!! >.< FEELS!!
cocoflower #6
Chapter 13: Lol , ha this is cute , cute kai ~
cocoflower #7
Chapter 10: Wifey... chanyeol.... ok ... kai blushes ... Lol
cocoflower #8
Chapter 8: I love this... nice
cocoflower #9
Chapter 6: LOL Chanyeol just to find a wifey ahaha xDD
cocoflower #10
Chapter 2: Lol suho ok