Carmine

Alternate a devilgirlmaria's playlist

                                                                           Ray/Hyunil (c-clown) and T-ae/Taeeun (rania)

 

Carmine hair, Crimson lips, cerulean eyes, porcelain, ivory skin. T-ae indeed brushed with red. Solmne, ink stained eyes, glittering eyeliner and mascara smudged from too much crying. She stood on the edge of life, swaying, swaying back and forth, black painted eyes aglaze, drunken. She was amaranthine undying, immortal, ethereal that was what she liked to think anyway. Hyunil stood afar (also on the rooftop) watching. His cecious eyes (ablaze) simply mesmerized by the girls pulchritudinous, her beauty enamoured him. The atmospehere dark, amororus, sombre. His mouth agape. For some unknown, bizzare reason he felt a deep, strong desire to paint her, paint her in all the cinnebar red that shrouded her. And so he did just that, watercolor wash. Her incandescence, Indeed she was nebulous. T-ae turned to look at him eyes a glint. Hyunil could swear her cerulean eyes sparked a tinge of a prussian blue hue. She laughed her laugh a lilting, blithe symphony, she smiled. Her smile melancholic but still beautiful all the same "Am I really that hypnotic?" she sighed. Hyunil stared at her, bewildered "I apologize" he whispered shyly, a blush sweeping his already modena face, frostbitten from the bitter tempestous wind. She turned from the nigricant sky to look at him, ink stained tears forming once again. It hurt his already gentle heart to see her like this, he swiftly walked towards her, hand outstreched. T-ae  hesitantly, intertwined her lithe hands in his loving, melliflous hands, tranquility instantly met her "What's your name" Hyunil asked voice soft and quiescent "Taeeun" she replied her voice resonant and for once in her life, T-ae felt that everything would be okay.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A/N: So I am so happy to finally write something new I've been wanting to write something for months but *sighs* my mind just isn't good for this kind of stuff lol

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blissful
#1
Chapter 27: omg is this a pretty word fest because i'm adoring it all *_*

"she likes swallowing her lovers" nom, me likes this line
AHH i love it, love it so much /shower me with more of your writing please dear <3 and we should totally do a collab or something aug just saying ;D <333
kisoap
#2
Chapter 19: YOU WROTE JAEYEON SCREAMS
whydidn'tiseethisearlier/slapsself

ok, i love love love the way that all the colors you've put in are pink/red/warm, it really does give off that "valentine" feeling ;__; (i admit, i had to look some of the colors up sdlgasdkf) my babies <3

"he likes dying his hair in obscure colors she doesn't mind" i really loved this line for some reason? it adds a sense of depth to their relationship especially in such a short piece ;___;

/frolics around in happiness <3
blissful
#3
Chapter 13: sometimes it's easier to find connection through
silence instead of words / in this case
its really sweet
& sad
but sweet LOL <3
starrify
#4
Chapter 10: pretty. pretty. ♡
/sits & soaks in your lovely writing
blissful
#5
Chapter 9: OMG.<3 "cerulean" , "porcelain", "melancholic"
stopp using all my favorite words you're killing me dear slowly
like a poisonous apple hahaha
but truly your writing is gorgeous (lol like your face! mwhaha)
i'm almost overwhelmed by the atmosphere you created & there is such a build up of strong emotions left lingering at the end
aug i want more. make your little drabbles longer just for me please -w- <3
eseech
#6
urghh I love all your stories :)
Honestly, when you write all the emotions jump at us like we're on a roller coaster and everything's so vivid. I don't really know how to explain your writing. The images and feelings you portray are very clear, and your use of words is just amazing <3 I love love love your writing :)
blissful
#7
Chapter 8: first of all, i adore the poster you made for this chapter!
i love it's nostalgic, watercolor feel (i'm really into watercolor myself right now XD)

second of all, OH MY CUPCAKES! it's so beautiful
i get swept away by the descriptions <3
haha this totally inspires me to write some more
blissful
#8
Chapter 4: your diction is extremely beautiful in this chapter
i would love to see a longer story though *cries*
_SlaveYoseob #9
Omg so many ships that I wouldn't typically sail on
Seungmi_Lynn
#10
Chapter 3: I hate everything about you~ why do I love you? this reminded me of a Three Days Grace's song
Myungzy~♥