This was not what you wanted

Alternate a devilgirlmaria's playlist

                                                                                      Alen (m4m) and Minha (9muses)

 

Minha lays on a bed of scarlet roses, thorns digging into her porcelain skin. Alen just across from her, sits and stares into nothingness, a black abyss. His prussian eyes now darken, her electric blue eyes tear up. She doesn't dare to look his way, unsaid words linger in the air lilac fumes. She has many things she wants to say but she is afraid that they will be forgotten, as he is slowly forgetting her, the traces of her slowly vanishing in his mind. He kisses her then, leaving an aurulant shade on her bruised rubine violet lips. Her lacquear galaxy nails traces the flutter of his lashes. She intertwines her slim fingers in his, leaving shimmer abound. A dust of summer sprinkle taints his eyes. 

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blissful
#1
Chapter 27: omg is this a pretty word fest because i'm adoring it all *_*

"she likes swallowing her lovers" nom, me likes this line
AHH i love it, love it so much /shower me with more of your writing please dear <3 and we should totally do a collab or something aug just saying ;D <333
kisoap
#2
Chapter 19: YOU WROTE JAEYEON SCREAMS
whydidn'tiseethisearlier/slapsself

ok, i love love love the way that all the colors you've put in are pink/red/warm, it really does give off that "valentine" feeling ;__; (i admit, i had to look some of the colors up sdlgasdkf) my babies <3

"he likes dying his hair in obscure colors she doesn't mind" i really loved this line for some reason? it adds a sense of depth to their relationship especially in such a short piece ;___;

/frolics around in happiness <3
blissful
#3
Chapter 13: sometimes it's easier to find connection through
silence instead of words / in this case
its really sweet
& sad
but sweet LOL <3
starrify
#4
Chapter 10: pretty. pretty. ♡
/sits & soaks in your lovely writing
blissful
#5
Chapter 9: OMG.<3 "cerulean" , "porcelain", "melancholic"
stopp using all my favorite words you're killing me dear slowly
like a poisonous apple hahaha
but truly your writing is gorgeous (lol like your face! mwhaha)
i'm almost overwhelmed by the atmosphere you created & there is such a build up of strong emotions left lingering at the end
aug i want more. make your little drabbles longer just for me please -w- <3
eseech
#6
urghh I love all your stories :)
Honestly, when you write all the emotions jump at us like we're on a roller coaster and everything's so vivid. I don't really know how to explain your writing. The images and feelings you portray are very clear, and your use of words is just amazing <3 I love love love your writing :)
blissful
#7
Chapter 8: first of all, i adore the poster you made for this chapter!
i love it's nostalgic, watercolor feel (i'm really into watercolor myself right now XD)

second of all, OH MY CUPCAKES! it's so beautiful
i get swept away by the descriptions <3
haha this totally inspires me to write some more
blissful
#8
Chapter 4: your diction is extremely beautiful in this chapter
i would love to see a longer story though *cries*
_SlaveYoseob #9
Omg so many ships that I wouldn't typically sail on
Seungmi_Lynn
#10
Chapter 3: I hate everything about you~ why do I love you? this reminded me of a Three Days Grace's song
Myungzy~♥