Stars tangle in her hair when she plays in the sky

Alternate a devilgirlmaria's playlist

                                                                                       Hyunil/Ray (c-clown) and T-ae (rania)

 

 

 

 

T-ae, stardust, porcelain, ivory complexion. Stars tangled in a waterful of cardinal hair. Hyunil sharp features all hollow and defined, all a shimmer of ebony. Sparkling mazarine sea, dusty wisteria swing hangs in the air. T-ae swings sarcoline toes slightly skimming the sea. Hyunil sits from afar on the dock and silently watches her.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't know I might expand this or make it longer more of a proper drabble but maybe you guys could think of this as a prompt and write something better HAHA, meh title taken from this http://www.goodreads.com/quotes/23818-stars-got-tangled-in-her-hair-whenever-she-played-in

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blissful #1
Chapter 27: omg is this a pretty word fest because i'm adoring it all *_*

"she likes swallowing her lovers" nom, me likes this line
AHH i love it, love it so much /shower me with more of your writing please dear <3 and we should totally do a collab or something aug just saying ;D <333
kisoap #2
Chapter 19: YOU WROTE JAEYEON SCREAMS
whydidn'tiseethisearlier/slapsself

ok, i love love love the way that all the colors you've put in are pink/red/warm, it really does give off that "valentine" feeling ;__; (i admit, i had to look some of the colors up sdlgasdkf) my babies <3

"he likes dying his hair in obscure colors she doesn't mind" i really loved this line for some reason? it adds a sense of depth to their relationship especially in such a short piece ;___;

/frolics around in happiness <3
blissful #3
Chapter 13: sometimes it's easier to find connection through
silence instead of words / in this case
its really sweet
& sad
but sweet LOL <3
starrify #4
Chapter 10: pretty. pretty. ♡
/sits & soaks in your lovely writing
blissful #5
Chapter 9: OMG.<3 "cerulean" , "porcelain", "melancholic"
stopp using all my favorite words you're killing me dear slowly
like a poisonous apple hahaha
but truly your writing is gorgeous (lol like your face! mwhaha)
i'm almost overwhelmed by the atmosphere you created & there is such a build up of strong emotions left lingering at the end
aug i want more. make your little drabbles longer just for me please -w- <3
eseech #6
urghh I love all your stories :)
Honestly, when you write all the emotions jump at us like we're on a roller coaster and everything's so vivid. I don't really know how to explain your writing. The images and feelings you portray are very clear, and your use of words is just amazing <3 I love love love your writing :)
blissful #7
Chapter 8: first of all, i adore the poster you made for this chapter!
i love it's nostalgic, watercolor feel (i'm really into watercolor myself right now XD)

second of all, OH MY CUPCAKES! it's so beautiful
i get swept away by the descriptions <3
haha this totally inspires me to write some more
blissful #8
Chapter 4: your diction is extremely beautiful in this chapter
i would love to see a longer story though *cries*
_SlaveYoseob #9
Omg so many ships that I wouldn't typically sail on
Seungmi_Lynn #10
Chapter 3: I hate everything about you~ why do I love you? this reminded me of a Three Days Grace's song
Myungzy~♥
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