Bokeh Valentine

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                                                                                                Jaeseop and Jiyeon

 

 

 

Jiyeons arulent eyes trace the contours of Jaeseop's face, every angle, his face defines sharp features, she likes that alot. Summer is abound, she likes that too. Jaeseop's eyes spark fuscia and it makes Jiyeon think of valentines day. His arms are florrid enclosed around her, holding her, holding her heart. Her gaze flitters over, she rests her face against the pane glass of the restuarant she's in. The city shimmers, like diamonds hazy cloudy bokehs, she likes that alot. Pink elephant delrium from the withdrawal of alcohol, something she's grown accustomed too but that doesn't stop her from loving the sheer amaranthine night. Her celestial skin sparkles scarlet from the heat. Her metalic tipped nails entangles in his jacinthe orange hair (he likes dying his hair in obscure colors she doesn't mind) She turns and nuzzles her face in his neck, his calloused hands carress her head "lets go out for a night stroll" he nods in agreement no words are needed. 

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blissful
#1
Chapter 27: omg is this a pretty word fest because i'm adoring it all *_*

"she likes swallowing her lovers" nom, me likes this line
AHH i love it, love it so much /shower me with more of your writing please dear <3 and we should totally do a collab or something aug just saying ;D <333
kisoap
#2
Chapter 19: YOU WROTE JAEYEON SCREAMS
whydidn'tiseethisearlier/slapsself

ok, i love love love the way that all the colors you've put in are pink/red/warm, it really does give off that "valentine" feeling ;__; (i admit, i had to look some of the colors up sdlgasdkf) my babies <3

"he likes dying his hair in obscure colors she doesn't mind" i really loved this line for some reason? it adds a sense of depth to their relationship especially in such a short piece ;___;

/frolics around in happiness <3
blissful
#3
Chapter 13: sometimes it's easier to find connection through
silence instead of words / in this case
its really sweet
& sad
but sweet LOL <3
starrify
#4
Chapter 10: pretty. pretty. ♡
/sits & soaks in your lovely writing
blissful
#5
Chapter 9: OMG.<3 "cerulean" , "porcelain", "melancholic"
stopp using all my favorite words you're killing me dear slowly
like a poisonous apple hahaha
but truly your writing is gorgeous (lol like your face! mwhaha)
i'm almost overwhelmed by the atmosphere you created & there is such a build up of strong emotions left lingering at the end
aug i want more. make your little drabbles longer just for me please -w- <3
eseech
#6
urghh I love all your stories :)
Honestly, when you write all the emotions jump at us like we're on a roller coaster and everything's so vivid. I don't really know how to explain your writing. The images and feelings you portray are very clear, and your use of words is just amazing <3 I love love love your writing :)
blissful
#7
Chapter 8: first of all, i adore the poster you made for this chapter!
i love it's nostalgic, watercolor feel (i'm really into watercolor myself right now XD)

second of all, OH MY CUPCAKES! it's so beautiful
i get swept away by the descriptions <3
haha this totally inspires me to write some more
blissful
#8
Chapter 4: your diction is extremely beautiful in this chapter
i would love to see a longer story though *cries*
_SlaveYoseob #9
Omg so many ships that I wouldn't typically sail on
Seungmi_Lynn
#10
Chapter 3: I hate everything about you~ why do I love you? this reminded me of a Three Days Grace's song
Myungzy~♥