story title → Do You Remember?
story author → RossEureka
reviewer → sunshine.

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title 8/10
because this was a challenge, you didn't have a choice for the title (at least that's what i'm assuming), but i still like it nonetheless. it's short, sweet, and suits the story well.

storyline 16/20
again, because of this being a part of a challenge, you probably didn't have much choice when it came to plot either. even so, i feel that you did a good job with what you were given. the plot didn't drag on and was very entertaining to read.

appearance 9/10
omg, i'm loving the poster! so pretty! i feel that the whole green-yellow scheme gives off somewhat of a bittersweet vibe, which suits the story well.

characterization 13/15
well done! it wasn't difficult trying to imagine the characters at all. with the wording and details you used, it really helped to create a clear image of the characters, and i felt that i could relate and connect to them.

story flow 8/10
just right - not too slow, not too fast. the storyline started well, went smoothly form event to event, and ended nicely.

vocabulary 9/10
again, wonderful wording! the way you used those words really gave me a very detailed image of what was going on.

creativity & originality 11/15
despite this being a entry for a challenge, where multiple people may have chosen the same storyline to use, you have managed to express your "voice" in your writing. this a very good thing to have, because then it sets you apart from all the rest, and will no doubt catch and keep the attention of readers.

overall enjoyment 8/10
excellent job, i truly and thoroughly enjoyed this story. I hope to see more works from you in the future.

bonus 5/5

total 87/100