Delusional

Description

You're delusional. You can't run away from your problems.

Foreword

Involves:

Implications of violence.

Death.

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veekay
#1
Chapter 1: Loved it!
It was really well written. ^^
JustDerpin
#2
Omg. I really loved. It was so well written and I just.. I can't. Even though it was a bit crazy, life is certainly like that, sometimes people think running away like that can help you from the harsh reality is sad. yet I find it cowardice in my opinion because a lot of people do strive for a happy ending even their lives are much worse than that, it's just unfair for them D: . But I can also see why she did that, seeing in the girls point of view, it was quite hard to be pushed around like that and at the same time, try to be perfect and be someone you aren't is really hard. But, if you see it another point of view like the parents, they would have not understood her feelings and felt everything will be fine, because they're so blinded of trying to be perfect to the point that they're so delusional they can't even see how unhappy their daughter(s) is or are(both of them) but seeing that the girl didn't tell her feelings about it, of course they wouldve not understand. Aigoo, I feel sad for the girl and Yixing. It's like Romeo and Juliet all over again! T^T

But puttig those sad side away, I think this should get more views/subbies! It's really awesome~ and maybe you could remove the suicide tag because people might misunderstand XD lol. Plus you'd be spoiling them of what would happen next~ just saying! Though you dont have to if you don't want to, of course :P
ParkSeungRin #3
SACRY OMG BUT I LOVE IT. Good job!
YongOppa
#4
Wow this is just great, awesome, daebak, jjang! :D You're an awesome writer! x) Keep it up! Don't be discouraged~~~^^ Hwaiting!
ShadowYin
#5
Amazed~ <3
Love this!!!!!
-serena
#6
I love this. I'm absolutely in love with your writing. As weird as this sounds, I really like her insanity and instability.
FriedChickie
#7
oh my god. this is crazy and scary but you have REALLY nice writing.
keep on writing~