River of Blood

Tears of a Phoenix

Your blood keeps flowing out from the slash Daehyun made like a river. But it wasn’t only your blood flowing out, it was also pain. Numbness started to get hold of your arm; you don’t know what to do. The bird keeps struggling between your fingers, pecking and chirping madly.

You can’t let go of it, it is your only hope. The harder the bird struggles, the smaller its flames get; until it was at the point of dying out. You can feel your end nearing; but something in your heart was also corrupting.

Revenge. Anger. Small hopes. Crushed dreams. Those times were running away. Before you close your eyes to dream for eternity, you see the phoenix melting back into ashes; slipping through your fingers, through your heart.

Sorry you have died in this chapter. Revive and live again for another adventure...? 

 

 

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The story is now complete! Thank you my subscribers! Please go to chapter 53 for something special. (:

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Jungkoyoung #1
OMG wow… I'm wooooow……
PuffyBunnyIsLazy
#2
Chapter 53: What can I say? This is incredibly awesome! I loved it so much! The craziness, dramaticness (is that even a word?), epicness are all so incredible!! Good job :D
-Star-Ra- #3
Chapter 1: I choose jongup
hambrejoyce #4
Chapter 53: wow that was crazy
I can't even
wow
justkeeponswimming
#5
Create more tabs, so more people can subscribe, and it's be easier to find~
But all in all
It's really good~
It's really dramatic and epic, but sometimes a little too dramatic but thats alright~
I really enjoyed it~
shayleely #6
Omg your story is so dramatic and epic HAHAHAHAH
eunki_kim #7
Chapter 7: Ok..I don't know what to choose..between believe that Yongguk is a nice guy or believe Daehyun is the right one... Please help me choose!!!!!!
juju95lc #8
This story is really good *o*!!! I think, I will keep the end story with Daehyun is my brother x)!!! it's a Happy ending no ? xD!!! I hope you make another story :p!!
JongHaNa
#9
Chapter 53: LOL!!! congrats on finishing!!!
I enjoyed half of it (since I also have been lazy)
It was good and I hope you make another story.