Good Sense

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“You have good sense,” Victoria said, and Lay sighed, kicking his feet into the dirt on the playground.

“You tell me that every day,” Lay replied, and Victoria laughed musically.

“Because it’s true. You do.” 

Foreword

This is technically Simple's Lay spinoff. 

Let me tell you that I hate this before you read it. I kind of forgot what kind of point I was trying to make, and I meant to characterize Lay like I did in Simple, but for some reason I went in a completely different direction and it all sort of backfired on me.

That being said, I don't think I'm going to rewrite this. I might edit some bits someday, but as for a complete rewrite, it's not going to happen. 

So yeah. Blah.

I'm not shipping Victoria and Lay or am I but if you read really really closely there's a ginormous spoiler for Simple's sequel that I hope is adequately disguised.

♥ Exie

Translated to Russian here!

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Tired_Moon
#1
Chapter 1: seriously love Viclay! He was such a great character in all the stories and as much as Chanyeol is my exo bias I found he was my favourite character in the stories. :$
colourlessrain #2
Chapter 1: REREADING THIS AFTER FATED BOND.
YES
;D
APPROVE EVERY BITE OF VICLAY <3

i really want to see their interactions now at smtown and stuff.
BUT <3
carefree
#3
Chapter 1: Didn't read 'Simple' but I really liked this, it was concise and bold! Maybe because I love Yixing so much >o< But you're definitely a strong writer, and I'll look forward for your other writings ^o^
llyta67 #4
Chapter 1: Is tao being happy 'for the time being' the spoiler?? I cudnt find anything else that sounds spoiler-ish.
mj_a_lover
#5
Chapter 1: "You don’t want to leave, do you?”< hint maybe?
xXxcielxXx #6
I couldnt really tell wut the hidden hint was but i guess ill find out in the sequel (which i cant wait for! >w<) i really luved ur story "simple"!! :D
Japanda #7
i cant seem to find the message you hidden, so imma be lazy and wait for your next moves
craisin
#8
Whaaaaaaaaaaat I thought you posted this before.....?